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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
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On Sat, 2 Feb 2013, Chris Rees wrote:
> On 2 Feb 2013 15:40, "Warren Block" <wblock@wonkity.com> wrote:
> > On Fri, 1 Feb 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote:
> >> +
> >> +    <indexterm>
> >> +      <primary>Resource limits</primary>
> >> +    </indexterm>
> >> +
> >> +    <para>For years, &os; has made use of a resource limits
> >> +      database controlled through a flat file
> >
> >
> > s/file/file,/
> >
> >
> >> +      <filename>/etc/login.conf</filename>.  While it has
> >> +      been discussed previously and is still supported, it
> >> +      is not the most optimal method of controlling resources.
> >> +      The flat file requires users to be divided into various
> >> +      group labels known as classes, which require changes not
> >> +      only to this flat file but also the password database.
> >> +      Potentially, a single, more constrained user would require
> >
> >
> > I want to say that the comma after "single" is not needed, but that's not quite right.  Maybe if "more constrained" was hyphenated.
> 
> Potentially a single, more constrained user...

Yes!

Also saw something above: "has made use of" can be just "has used".
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