From owner-cvs-src@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 18 05:24:15 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-src@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A264416A4CE; Tue, 18 May 2004 05:24:15 -0700 (PDT) Received: from darkness.comp.waw.pl (darkness.comp.waw.pl [195.117.238.236]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BB42443D5C; Tue, 18 May 2004 05:24:13 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from pjd@darkness.comp.waw.pl) Received: by darkness.comp.waw.pl (Postfix, from userid 1009) id 9D359ACBCF; Tue, 18 May 2004 14:24:10 +0200 (CEST) Date: Tue, 18 May 2004 14:24:10 +0200 From: Pawel Jakub Dawidek To: Lukas Ertl Message-ID: <20040518122410.GL845@darkness.comp.waw.pl> References: <200405181133.i4IBXbnH078994@repoman.freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="w1d+AIiKduYp7JzL" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200405181133.i4IBXbnH078994@repoman.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2i X-PGP-Key-URL: http://people.freebsd.org/~pjd/pjd.asc X-OS: FreeBSD 5.2.1-RC2 i386 cc: cvs-src@FreeBSD.org cc: src-committers@FreeBSD.org cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: src/share/man/man9 g_access.9 g_attach.9 g_bio.9 g_consumer.9 g_data.9 g_event.9 g_provider.9 g_provider_by_name.9 g_wither_geom.9 X-BeenThere: cvs-src@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the src tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 18 May 2004 12:24:15 -0000 --w1d+AIiKduYp7JzL Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-2 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Tue, May 18, 2004 at 04:33:37AM -0700, Lukas Ertl wrote: +> le 2004/05/18 04:33:37 PDT +>=20 +> FreeBSD src repository +>=20 +> Modified files: +> share/man/man9 g_access.9 g_attach.9 g_bio.9=20 +> g_consumer.9 g_data.9 g_event.9=20 +> g_provider.9 g_provider_by_name.9=20 +> g_wither_geom.9=20 +> Log: +> Update several GEOM related manual pages: +> =20 +> *) Fix spelling errors. +> *) Better english. +> *) Re-phrasing. Everything looks ok, only few things. +> .Sh DESCRIPTION +> The +> .Fn g_attach +> -function attaches given consumer to given provider. +> -For real provider access (ie. I/O operations), one still need to call t= he +> -.Fn g_access +> -function on consumer to gain access to attached provider. +> +function attaches given consumer +> +.Fa cp +> +to given provider +> +.Fa pp , +> +thus establishing a communication channel between the consumer and the +> +provider that allows to change access counts or perform I/O operations. I'm not sure "or" is right word here, as we first _must_ change access count and then we can perform I/O operations. +> .It Dv BIO_GETATTR +> -Get attribute supports inspection and manipulation of out\-of\-band +> +Inspect and manipulate out\-of\-band +> attributes on a particular provider or path. Those \ aren't needed here. +> -The provider name is created in a printf\-like way from the rest of +> +The name of the provider, which will appear as device in devfs, is crea= ted +> +in a printf\-like way from the rest of We don't need \ here as well. Thanks for those cleanups and sorry once again. --=20 Pawel Jakub Dawidek http://www.FreeBSD.org pjd@FreeBSD.org http://garage.freebsd.pl FreeBSD committer Am I Evil? Yes, I Am! --w1d+AIiKduYp7JzL Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.4 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFAqgBqForvXbEpPzQRAv6bAJwKP9Lngo37+v7aNkAHH6WeYV+38wCfSwBW o5cxwjaIP5yJMQAW8XogUaI= =Ss78 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --w1d+AIiKduYp7JzL--