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Sun, 8 Mar 2020 14:15:42 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc@emphyrio.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 028DFgdG002118; Sun, 8 Mar 2020 14:15:42 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc) Date: Sun, 8 Mar 2020 14:15:42 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille To: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r53958 - in head: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall share/images/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <20200308131542.GA2010@emphyrio.blackend.org> References: <202003081039.028AdVem023976@repo.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <202003081039.028AdVem023976@repo.freebsd.org> X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 48b20n5PNYz3GH3 X-Spamd-Bar: + Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org; dkim=none; dmarc=none; spf=none (mx1.freebsd.org: domain of marc@blackend.org has no SPF policy when checking 2a01:e0c:1:1599::13) smtp.mailfrom=marc@blackend.org X-Spamd-Result: default: False [1.01 / 15.00]; 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Please readd it. > menu shown in . Use the > up and down arrows to select the keymap that most closely > represents the mapping of the keyboard attached to the system. > @@ -2308,7 +2308,7 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID: 830b92d4. ntpdate - Enable the automatic > clock synchronization at boot time. The functionality of > this program is now available in the ntpd daemon. After a ^^^^ &man.ntdp.8; should be used there. > - suitable period of mourning, the &man.ntpd.8; utility will > + suitable period of mourning, the &man.ntpdate.8; utility will > be retired. > > [...] -- Marc