From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Sep 19 15:33:37 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 18467B61; Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:37 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id DEE99307; Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:36 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9) with ESMTP id s8JFXaHp081933; Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:36 GMT (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from bjk@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9/Submit) id s8JFXap4081932; Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:36 GMT (envelope-from bjk@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201409191533.s8JFXap4081932@svn.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: svn.freebsd.org: bjk set sender to bjk@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Benjamin Kaduk Date: Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:36 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r45641 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18-1 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 19 Sep 2014 15:33:37 -0000 Author: bjk Date: Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014 New Revision: 45641 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/45641 Log: Massage some igor fixes to improve grammar and readability Approved by: hrs (mentor) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Fri Sep 19 00:14:10 2014 (r45640) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml Fri Sep 19 15:33:36 2014 (r45641) @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ </vuln> The tag names are supposed to be self-explanatory so we - shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be fill + shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be filled in: @@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ <le>, <eq>, <ge>, and - <gt> elements. Check the version + <gt> elements. Check that the version ranges given do not overlap. In a range specification, * @@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ Testing Changes to the VuXML Database - Assume a new entry for a + This example describes a new entry for a vulnerability in the package clamav that has been fixed in version 0.65_7. @@ -467,7 +467,7 @@ &prompt.user; packaudit To verify that the <affected> - section of the entry will match correct package(s), issue this + section of the entry will match the correct package(s), issue this command: &prompt.user; portaudit -f /usr/ports/INDEX -r uuid