From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Nov 23 09:58:10 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E776D16A4CE; Sun, 23 Nov 2003 09:58:10 -0800 (PST) Received: from shaft.techsupport.co.uk (shaft.techsupport.co.uk [212.250.77.214]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2033743FDF; Sun, 23 Nov 2003 09:58:09 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from cpc2-cdif3-6-0-cust204.cdif.cable.ntl.com ([81.103.67.204] helo=shrike.submonkey.net ident=mailnull) by shaft.techsupport.co.uk with esmtp (TLSv1:DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.24; FreeBSD 4.9) id 1ANyUp-000GuR-GK; Sun, 23 Nov 2003 17:58:07 +0000 Received: from setantae by shrike.submonkey.net with local (Exim 4.24; FreeBSD 4.9) id 1ANyUm-0007zM-KF; Sun, 23 Nov 2003 17:58:04 +0000 Date: Sun, 23 Nov 2003 17:58:04 +0000 From: Ceri Davies To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Message-ID: <20031123175804.GY66785@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org References: <200311231752.hANHqCqM010298@repoman.freebsd.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="CYcXvPfqKSDi0QhV" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200311231752.hANHqCqM010298@repoman.freebsd.org> X-PGP: finger ceri@FreeBSD.org User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.4i Sender: Ceri Davies Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail chapter.sgml ... X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 23 Nov 2003 17:58:11 -0000 --CYcXvPfqKSDi0QhV Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Nov 23, 2003 at 09:52:12AM -0800, Ceri Davies wrote: > ceri 2003/11/23 09:52:12 PST >=20 > FreeBSD doc repository >=20 > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking=20 > chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml=20 > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml=20 > Log: > Correct some misuses of "its" and "it's". It's slightly worrying to note that we currently violate the Law of Conservation of Apostrophes, which states: For every apostrophe omitted from an it's, there is an extra one put into an its. Hopefully this will even out over the rest of the doc tree. > Also expand some contractions of the same, discovered while I was > hunting down all of the above. Also note that the handbook (especially the security chapter) is rife with contractions, which I believe we are against. Personally, I am not against them enough to concern myself with that right now. Ceri --=20 --CYcXvPfqKSDi0QhV Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/wPUsocfcwTS3JF8RAuJEAKCsdaCaZyLodQMKeVsSemBoRqXYtQCgpuRu wIcEiMIr6fs7x9x9iP8Td9I= =g246 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --CYcXvPfqKSDi0QhV--