From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG  Mon Jan  4 21:11:33 2010
Return-Path: <owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG>
Delivered-To: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org
Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34])
	by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1AC621065670;
	Mon,  4 Jan 2010 21:11:33 +0000 (UTC)
	(envelope-from gavin@FreeBSD.org)
Received: from mail-gw2.york.ac.uk (mail-gw2.york.ac.uk [144.32.128.247])
	by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A18568FC18;
	Mon,  4 Jan 2010 21:11:32 +0000 (UTC)
Received: from mail-gw6.york.ac.uk (mail-gw6.york.ac.uk [144.32.129.26])
	by mail-gw2.york.ac.uk (8.13.6/8.13.6) with ESMTP id o04LBRPm003093;
	Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:11:27 GMT
Received: from ury.york.ac.uk ([144.32.108.81])
	by mail-gw6.york.ac.uk with esmtps (TLSv1:AES256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.68)
	(envelope-from <gavin@FreeBSD.org>)
	id 1NRuD1-0003B2-RV; Mon, 04 Jan 2010 21:11:27 +0000
Received: from ury.york.ac.uk (localhost.york.ac.uk [127.0.0.1])
	by ury.york.ac.uk (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id o04LBRBv051334;
	Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:11:27 GMT (envelope-from gavin@FreeBSD.org)
Received: from localhost (gavin@localhost)
	by ury.york.ac.uk (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) with ESMTP id o04LBRI3051331; 
	Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:11:27 GMT (envelope-from gavin@FreeBSD.org)
X-Authentication-Warning: ury.york.ac.uk: gavin owned process doing -bs
Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:11:27 +0000 (GMT)
From: Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org>
X-X-Sender: gavin@ury.york.ac.uk
To: Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org>
In-Reply-To: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org>
Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1001042109440.41098@ury.york.ac.uk>
References: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org>
User-Agent: Alpine 2.00 (BSF 1167 2008-08-23)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII
X-York-MailScanner: Found to be clean
X-York-MailScanner-From: gavin@freebsd.org
Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml
X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5
Precedence: list
List-Id: **OBSOLETE** CVS commit messages for the entire tree
	<cvs-all.freebsd.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all>,
	<mailto:cvs-all-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/cvs-all>
List-Post: <mailto:cvs-all@freebsd.org>
List-Help: <mailto:cvs-all-request@freebsd.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/cvs-all>,
	<mailto:cvs-all-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 04 Jan 2010 21:11:33 -0000

On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote:
> dougb       2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script
>   did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an
>   unexpanded example.
>   
>   Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup.

>       <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service
> 	earlier all ports scripts should use
>-	<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service
>+	<programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service
> 	runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory.

This is now grammatically incorrect.  I actually think the original is 
better than any rewording I can come up with.

Gavin