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Date:      Fri, 2 Oct 2015 12:40:04 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r47481 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks
Message-ID:  <201510021240.t92Ce5pW082690@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: dru
Date: Fri Oct  2 12:40:04 2015
New Revision: 47481
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47481

Log:
  Improve wording.
  
  Submitted by: wblock

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Fri Oct  2 10:33:18 2015	(r47480)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Fri Oct  2 12:40:04 2015	(r47481)
@@ -2906,8 +2906,8 @@ geli_da2_flags="-p -k /root/<replaceable
 
       <para>By default, &man.geli.8; uses the <acronym>AES</acronym>
 	algorithm with a key length of 128 bits.  Normally the default
-	settings will suffice.  However, if desired these defaults can
-	be altered in the options field in
+	settings will suffice.  If desired, these defaults can be
+	altered in the options field in
 	<filename>/etc/fstab</filename>.  The possible flags
 	are:</para>
 



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