From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Sep 4 11:48:44 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9851716A4BF; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 11:48:44 -0700 (PDT) Received: from shaft.techsupport.co.uk (shaft.techsupport.co.uk [212.250.77.214]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 332E743FE5; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 11:48:41 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from pc3-cdif2-5-cust222.cdif.cable.ntl.com ([81.101.152.222] helo=shrike.submonkey.net ident=mailnull) by shaft.techsupport.co.uk with esmtp (TLSv1:DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.20) id 19uz9r-0004u8-Bw; Thu, 04 Sep 2003 19:48:39 +0100 Received: from setantae by shrike.submonkey.net with local (Exim 4.22) id 19uz9k-0008Y7-D5; Thu, 04 Sep 2003 19:48:32 +0100 Date: Thu, 4 Sep 2003 19:48:32 +0100 From: Ceri Davies To: Tom Rhodes Message-ID: <20030904184832.GK25063@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , Tom Rhodes , FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org, Robert Watson References: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20030904182836.GJ25063@submonkey.net> <20030904140723.706bafeb.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="s9kDAZ2EyO0AcRYa" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20030904140723.706bafeb.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> X-PGP: finger ceri@FreeBSD.org User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.4i Sender: Ceri Davies cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org cc: Robert Watson Subject: Re: [Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 04 Sep 2003 18:48:44 -0000 --s9kDAZ2EyO0AcRYa Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 02:07:23PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > On Thu, 4 Sep 2003 19:28:36 +0100 > Ceri Davies wrote: >=20 > > On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > > > Greetings -doc team, Robert, > > >=20 > > > Please see the diff and give me feedback. This has already gone > > > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's > > > review. Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit'= s" > > > now. > >=20 > > OK, here are my comments (the ones I posted earlier were not from me, > > but posted on behalf of my brother), from a quick scan. > >=20 > > servers – meaning that external entities can connect and t= alk > >=20 >=20 > Well, that – is something minor that needs fixed, like 'security(7)' > and some other things. Agreed. > The rest of your changes are fine, and I applied the diff. Thanks for > the catching! :) Sorry, I found one more thing: + &prompt.root;kadmin + kadmin> ext --keytab=3D/tmp/example.keytab host/myserver.smithclan.= prv + kadmin> exit Should the myserver.smithclan.prv now read myserver.example.com? > Diff the diff with a .diff, yo! ... God I need help. :) Yeah, it made my eyes bleed too ;-0 Ceri --=20 User: DO YOU ACCEPT JESUS CHRIST AS YOUR PERSONAL LORD AND SAVIOR? Iniaes: Sure, I can accept all forms of payment. -- www.chatterboxchallenge.com --s9kDAZ2EyO0AcRYa Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/V4kAocfcwTS3JF8RApySAKCYGh1aWulSTZL+Gyzxg1YJuMq+qwCfbHUs qq9VTqtx29EAaGI5k3VBG/8= =gNl+ -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --s9kDAZ2EyO0AcRYa--