From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Dec 21 12:49:45 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4058F37B401; Sat, 21 Dec 2002 12:49:44 -0800 (PST) Received: from sccrmhc02.attbi.com (sccrmhc02.attbi.com [204.127.202.62]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8614B43EE5; Sat, 21 Dec 2002 12:49:43 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from swear@attbi.com) Received: from localhost.localdomain ([12.242.158.67]) by sccrmhc02.attbi.com (sccrmhc02) with ESMTP id <20021221204932002000dbqqe>; Sat, 21 Dec 2002 20:49:32 +0000 Received: from localhost.localdomain (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by localhost.localdomain (8.12.6/8.12.5) with ESMTP id gBLKn8k7021948; Sat, 21 Dec 2002 12:49:08 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from swear@attbi.com) Received: (from jojo@localhost) by localhost.localdomain (8.12.6/8.12.5/Submit) id gBLJVtEP020990; Sat, 21 Dec 2002 11:31:55 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from swear@attbi.com) X-Authentication-Warning: localhost.localdomain: jojo set sender to swear@attbi.com using -f To: Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Review change on committer's handbook References: <20021221161720.57251.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> From: swear@attbi.com (Gary W. Swearingen) Date: 21 Dec 2002 11:31:55 -0800 In-Reply-To: <20021221161720.57251.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> Message-ID: Lines: 25 User-Agent: Gnus/5.0808 (Gnus v5.8.8) XEmacs/21.1 (Cuyahoga Valley) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira writes: > + Send mail to &a.portmgr; with the repo copy > + request listing the reasons for it. First, &a.portmgr; > + will evaluate it. Next, &a.cvs; will do a repository > + copy from the old location/name to the new location/name > + if &a.portmgr; approves it. You will then receive a > + notice, at which point you are expected to perform > + the following: I have only quibbles, but since you seem to care... If "repo" is an accepted abbreviation, use it in both places; else use the full word in both places. Or at least use the full word before using the abbreviation. The second sentence would read better to me as: Next, if &a.portmgr; approves it, &a.cvs; will do a repository copy from the old location/name to the new location/name. (It seems more chronological, in some weak sense, in your series of steps.) BTW: Is "location/name" necessary? I'd think "Location" would suffice. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message