From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jul 9 12:00:38 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E6AD316A480; Mon, 9 Jul 2007 12:00:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [69.147.83.41]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BEC4813C483; Mon, 9 Jul 2007 12:00:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l69C0cSd030485; Mon, 9 Jul 2007 12:00:38 GMT (envelope-from blackend@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from blackend@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l69C0c2k030484; Mon, 9 Jul 2007 12:00:38 GMT (envelope-from blackend) Message-Id: <200707091200.l69C0c2k030484@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Marc Fonvieille Date: Mon, 9 Jul 2007 12:00:38 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 09 Jul 2007 12:00:39 -0000 blackend 2007-07-09 12:00:38 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11 chapter.sgml Log: - Reword the sentence about what is X11 to make it closer to "a consensus of opinion" and to the reality [1] - Various style, grammar and punctuation fixes [1] - Update the name of the FreeBSD KDE team to "KDE on FreeBSD team" (based on http://freebsd.kde.org/) PR: doc/114337 [1] Submitted by: Ben Kaduk Revision Changes Path 1.183 +14 -14 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.sgml