From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Apr 3 12:58:12 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CD4187EA; Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AC5D69D3; Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s33CwC89080013; Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from dru@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s33CwCWi080012; Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 GMT (envelope-from dru@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201404031258.s33CwCWi080012@svn.freebsd.org> From: Dru Lavigne Date: Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44425 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 03 Apr 2014 12:58:12 -0000 Author: dru Date: Thu Apr 3 12:58:12 2014 New Revision: 44425 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44425 Log: Minor wordsmithing suggested by bjk and wblock. Submitted by: bjk, wblock Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Wed Apr 2 20:11:22 2014 (r44424) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Thu Apr 3 12:58:12 2014 (r44425) @@ -1543,25 +1543,25 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB Poudriere is a BSD-licensed utility for creating and testing &os; packages. It uses &os; jails to set up isolated - compilation environments which can be used to build packages for - versions of &os; that are different from the box on which it is + compilation environments. These jails can be used to build packages for + versions of &os; that are different from the system on which it is installed, and also to build packages for i386 if the host is an - &arch.amd64; system. Once the packages are built, they will be - in a layout identical to the official mirrors and are therefore - usable by &man.pkg.8; and other package management + &arch.amd64; system. Once the packages are built, they are + in a layout identical to the official mirrors. These packages + are usable by &man.pkg.8; and other package management tools. - Poudriere can be installed using + Poudriere is installed using the ports-mgmt/poudriere package - or port. The installation will include a sample configuration + or port. The installation includes a sample configuration file /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf.sample. - This file should be copied to - /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf which can - then be edited to suit the local configuration. + Copy this file to + /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf. Edit the + copied file to suit the local configuration. While ZFS is not required on the system running poudriere, it is beneficial. - When ZFS is used, the + When ZFS is used, ZPOOL must be specified in /usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf and FREEBSD_HOST should be set to a nearby @@ -1583,14 +1583,14 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB Initialize Jails and Port Trees - Once configured, initialize + After configuration, initialize poudriere so that it installs a jail with the required &os; tree and a ports tree. Specify a name for the jail using and the &os; version with . On systems running &os;/&arch.amd64;, the architecture can be set with to either i386 or - amd64. The default is to use the + amd64. The default is the architecture shown by uname. &prompt.root; poudriere jail -c -j 10amd64 -v 10.0-RELEASE @@ -1666,13 +1666,13 @@ devel/git ports-mgmt/pkg ... - To configure the options and dependencies for the - specified ports: + Options and dependencies for the specified ports are + configured:: &prompt.root; poudriere options -j 10amd64 -p local -z workstation -f workstation-pkglist - Finally, to build the packages and create the package - repository: + Finally, packages are built and a package + repository is created: &prompt.root; poudriere bulk -j 10amd64 -p local -z workstation -f workstation-pkglist @@ -1684,7 +1684,7 @@ ports-mgmt/pkg that can be used with a web server to display build information. - Once the build is complete, packages are now available for + Packages are now available for installation from the poudriere repository.