From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed May 21 13:54:02 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6D4A837B401 for ; Wed, 21 May 2003 13:54:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ic.ucsb.edu (ic.ucsb.edu [128.111.151.230]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2082843F93 for ; Wed, 21 May 2003 13:54:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chris@ic.ucsb.edu) Received: from chris (helo=localhost) by ic.ucsb.edu with local-esmtp (Exim 3.36 #1) id 19Iab3-0008zu-00 for doc@freebsd.org; Wed, 21 May 2003 13:54:01 -0700 Date: Wed, 21 May 2003 13:54:01 -0700 (PDT) From: Christopher Dempsey To: doc@freebsd.org Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII Subject: Grammar error in handbook/acpi-overview.html X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 21 May 2003 20:54:02 -0000 "The hardware was either controlled by some sort of BIOS embedded interface, i.e.: Plug and Play BIOS (PNPBIOS), Advanced Power Management (APM) and so on." The word either doesn't really made sense here in the third sentence of the first paragraph. Should it be "either controlled by some sort of BIOS embedded interface ..." Hiten and Tom (and the rest of -doc) do a great job with the Handbook. Keep up the good work! Thanks! Chris -- ********************** Chris Dempsey Lead Developer UCSB Graduate Division Inter arma silent leges