From owner-freebsd-doc Sat Jul 27 6:40:20 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F49237B400 for ; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 06:40:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 97ADD43E3B for ; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 06:40:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.4/8.12.4) with ESMTP id g6RDe2JU055693 for ; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 06:40:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.4/8.12.4/Submit) id g6RDe2f9055692; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 06:40:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9CAE137B400 for ; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 06:38:28 -0700 (PDT) Received: from Kain.sumuk.de (Kain.sumuk.de [213.221.86.114]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B2DA43E3B for ; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 06:38:27 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from vincent@Kain.sumuk.de) Received: from Kain.sumuk.de (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by Kain.sumuk.de (8.12.3/8.12.3) with ESMTP id g6RDcPpE006633 for ; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 15:38:26 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from vincent@Kain.sumuk.de) Received: (from vincent@localhost) by Kain.sumuk.de (8.12.3/8.12.3/Submit) id g6RDcPt5006632; Sat, 27 Jul 2002 15:38:25 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <200207271338.g6RDcPt5006632@Kain.sumuk.de> Date: Sat, 27 Jul 2002 15:38:25 +0200 (CEST) From: Martin Heinen Reply-To: Martin Heinen To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/41049: [PATCH] cleanup of elements Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 41049 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] cleanup of elements >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Jul 27 06:40:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Martin Heinen >Release: FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD Kain.sumuk.de 4.6-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 4.6-PRERELEASE #0: Sun May 12 20:01:38 CEST 2002 toor@Kain.sumuk.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/KAIN i386 >Description: Following revision 1.92 of disks/chapter.sgml cleanup elements in the books of the Documentation Project. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Index: books/faq/book.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.461 diff -u -r1.461 book.sgml --- books/faq/book.sgml 22 Jul 2002 14:10:07 -0000 1.461 +++ books/faq/book.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:11:15 -0000 @@ -4984,7 +4984,7 @@ that will update installed ports to the latest version in the ports tree. - &prompt.root; pkg_version > /tmp/myscript + &prompt.root; pkg_version -c > /tmp/myscript The output script must be edited by hand before you use it. Current versions of @@ -6075,7 +6075,7 @@ Unmounting the device is simple: - &prompt.user; umount ~/my-mount-point + &prompt.user; umount ~/my-mount-point Enabling vfs.usermount, however, has negative security implications. A better way to access MSDOS Index: books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.134 diff -u -r1.134 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 16 Jul 2002 02:11:35 -0000 1.134 +++ books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:13:58 -0000 @@ -867,7 +867,7 @@ The general format of the command line you will type is as follows: - &prompt.root; make + &prompt.root; make -VARIABLE target In this example, is an option that you would pass to &man.make.1;. See the Index: books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.92 diff -u -r1.92 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 09:21:57 -0000 1.92 +++ books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:16:28 -0000 @@ -850,7 +850,7 @@ that is an image of a directory tree in the Unix filesystem name space. The simplest usage is: - &prompt.root; mkisofs imagefile.iso /path/to/tree + &prompt.root; mkisofs -o imagefile.iso /path/to/tree filesystems @@ -929,7 +929,7 @@ as /usr/sbin/burncd. Usage is very simple, as it has few options: - &prompt.root; burncd cddevice data imagefile.iso fixate + &prompt.root; burncd -f cddevice data imagefile.iso fixate Will burn a copy of imagefile.iso on cddevice. The default device is @@ -957,7 +957,7 @@ is even simpler than burncd. Burning an ISO 9660 image is done with: - &prompt.root; cdrecord device imagefile.iso + &prompt.root; cdrecord dev=device imagefile.iso The tricky part of using cdrecord is finding the to use. To find the proper setting, use @@ -967,7 +967,7 @@ CDROMs burning - &prompt.root; cdrecord + &prompt.root; cdrecord -scanbus Cdrecord 1.9 (i386-unknown-freebsd4.2) Copyright (C) 1995-2000 Jörg Schilling Using libscg version 'schily-0.1' scsibus0: @@ -994,7 +994,7 @@ numbers separated by commas as the value for . In this case, the CRW device is 1,5,0, so the appropriate input would be - =1,5,0. There are easier + . There are easier ways to specify this value; see &man.cdrecord.1; for details. That is also the place to look for information on writing audio tracks, controlling the speed, and other things. Index: books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.78 diff -u -r1.78 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml 1 Jul 2002 18:38:17 -0000 1.78 +++ books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:08:20 -0000 @@ -164,9 +164,9 @@ you have access to an official FreeBSD CDROM, then you can also install the source from the command line: - &prompt.root; mount /cdrom -&prompt.root; mkdir -p /usr/src/sys -&prompt.root; ln -s /usr/src/sys /sys + &prompt.root; mount /cdrom +&prompt.root; mkdir -p /usr/src/sys +&prompt.root; ln -s /usr/src/sys /sys &prompt.root; cat /cdrom/sys/ssys.[a-d]* | tar -xzvf Index: books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.83 diff -u -r1.83 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 22 Jul 2002 15:57:39 -0000 1.83 +++ books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:08:55 -0000 @@ -2255,7 +2255,7 @@ manuals pages for &man.chmod.1; and &man.chown.8; for further information. &prompt.root; chown root:wheel /etc/ppp/ppp.conf -&prompt.root; chmod 600 /etc/ppp/ppp.conf +&prompt.root; chmod 600 /etc/ppp/ppp.conf This will open a tunnel for a PPP session to your DSL router. Index: books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.57 diff -u -r1.57 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml 29 Apr 2002 12:22:28 -0000 1.57 +++ books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:09:57 -0000 @@ -629,7 +629,7 @@ Type: - &prompt.root; lptcontrol -i -d /dev/lptN + &prompt.root; lptcontrol -i -d /dev/lptN to set interrupt-driven mode for lptN. @@ -638,7 +638,7 @@ Type: - &prompt.root; lptcontrol -p -d /dev/lptN + &prompt.root; lptcontrol -p -d /dev/lptN to set polled-mode for lptN. Index: books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.33 diff -u -r1.33 chapter.sgml --- books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml 26 Jul 2002 19:51:56 -0000 1.33 +++ books/handbook/users/chapter.sgml 27 Jul 2002 13:19:24 -0000 @@ -1007,8 +1007,8 @@ Adding a Group Using &man.pw.8; - &prompt.root; pw groupadd teamtwo -&prompt.root; pw groupshow teamtwo + &prompt.root; pw groupadd teamtwo +&prompt.root; pw groupshow teamtwo teamtwo:*:1100: @@ -1021,8 +1021,8 @@ Adding Somebody to a Group Using &man.pw.8; - &prompt.root; pw groupmod teamtwo jru -&prompt.root; pw groupshow teamtwo + &prompt.root; pw groupmod teamtwo -M jru +&prompt.root; pw groupshow teamtwo teamtwo:*:1100:jru @@ -1040,7 +1040,7 @@ Using &man.id.1; to Determine Group Membership - &prompt.user; id jru + &prompt.user; id jru uid=1001(jru) gid=1001(jru) groups=1001(jru), 1100(teamtwo) >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message