From owner-freebsd-doc Fri Oct 12 6:44:58 2001 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mta07-svc.ntlworld.com (mta07-svc.ntlworld.com [62.253.162.47]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CBCE37B407 for ; Fri, 12 Oct 2001 06:44:54 -0700 (PDT) Received: from eborcom.com ([62.253.88.227]) by mta07-svc.ntlworld.com (InterMail vM.4.01.03.00 201-229-121) with SMTP id <20011012134451.VECY710.mta07-svc.ntlworld.com@eborcom.com> for ; Fri, 12 Oct 2001 14:44:51 +0100 Received: (qmail 8563 invoked by uid 1001); 12 Oct 2001 13:44:40 -0000 Date: Fri, 12 Oct 2001 14:44:40 +0100 From: Tom Hukins To: Rahul Siddharthan Cc: Jean-Francois Dockes , freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: Updated 'diskless operation' section for the handbook Message-ID: <20011012144440.B8427@eborcom.com> Mail-Followup-To: Tom Hukins , Rahul Siddharthan , Jean-Francois Dockes , freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG References: <200110121003.f9CA37p10022@hautmedoc.dockes.com> <20011012124351.A7169@eborcom.com> <20011012153542.A77622@lpt.ens.fr> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.2.5i In-Reply-To: <20011012153542.A77622@lpt.ens.fr>; from rsidd@physics.iisc.ernet.in on Fri, Oct 12, 2001 at 03:35:42PM +0200 Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On Fri, Oct 12, 2001 at 03:35:42PM +0200, Rahul Siddharthan wrote: > Maybe none of my business, but: No, it's always good to receive feedback. I'd spend my time on a proprietary OS if I didn't want people to review my work. :) > Tom Hukins said on Oct 12, 2001 at 12:43:51: > > > > The attached patch contains fixes for some of the English, a minor > > stylistic change (linking directly to a man page) and a few examples > > of removing unecessary space within tags. > > I don't see the point of *any* of the "English" changes; the original > language was correct, as far as I can see, and the new language does > not seem improved. There's a very good reason for that - I messed up the patch. Everything with a "-" next to it is a change I made and everything with a "+" is the original text. I completely agree with the comments you made, which is why I made the changes. Sorry to have wasted your time like this, but it does seem a little amusing... Tom To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message