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Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2002 16:41:35 -0500 (EST)
From: John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org>
To: (Bruce A. Mah) <bmah@freebsd.org>
Subject: Re: FreeBSD/sparc64 install document active in -CURRENT
Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, freebsd-sparc@freebsd.org,
	Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de>
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On 14-Mar-2002 Bruce A. Mah wrote:
> If memory serves me right, Udo Erdelhoff wrote:
> 
> Good job...I can't believe I left off so many closing tags (admittedly 
> I wasn't looking for them).  Two minor things...
> 
>> @@ -139,12 +139,10 @@
>>      on the keyboard, or send a
>>          <command>BREAK</command> over the serial console (using for
>>          example <command>~#</command> in &man.tip.1; or &man.cu.1;) to
>> -        get to the PROM prompt.  It looks like
>> +        get to the PROM prompt.  It looks like this:</para>
>>  
>> -        <screen>ok </screen>
>> -        or
>> -        <screen>ok {0} </screen>
>> -        (on SMP systems).</para>
>> +        <screen><prompt>ok     </prompt>      (systems with one CPU)
>> +<prompt>ok {0} </prompt>      (SMP systems)</screen>
> 
> Can we get "(systems with one CPU)" and "(SMP systems)" outside the 
> <screen></screen> element?  They're explanatory text, not literal stuff 
> that shows up on the screen.  Not sure if there's an easy way to do 
> this.

Use a callout.  See the docbook docs on how to do callouts.  They are
specifically designed for these types of things.

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