From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Wed Dec 27 11:16:06 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A774EE86051; Wed, 27 Dec 2017 11:16:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7BB3123EC; Wed, 27 Dec 2017 11:16:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id vBRBG5jF055064; Wed, 27 Dec 2017 11:16:05 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id vBRBG5LY055063; Wed, 27 Dec 2017 11:16:05 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201712271116.vBRBG5LY055063@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: eadler set sender to eadler@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Eitan Adler Date: Wed, 27 Dec 2017 11:16:05 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r51340 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/flyer X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: eadler X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/flyer X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 51340 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 27 Dec 2017 11:16:06 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Wed Dec 27 11:16:05 2017 New Revision: 51340 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51340 Log: flyer: update the text a bit Try and make the flyer a bit nicer. It can do with some formatting changes and an overall reduction of wordyness but this is a start. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/flyer/flyer.tex Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/flyer/flyer.tex ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/flyer/flyer.tex Tue Dec 26 22:49:40 2017 (r51339) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/flyer/flyer.tex Wed Dec 27 11:16:05 2017 (r51340) @@ -105,13 +105,7 @@ {\newcommand{\size}{12.7cm}} \titledframe{What is FreeBSD?}{ -FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for x86 compatible (including -Pentium\reg and Athlon\tm), amd64 compatible (including Opteron\tm, -Athlon\tm 64, and EM64T), UltraSPARC\reg, IA-64 (Intel\reg Itanium\reg -Processor Family), PC-98 and ARM architectures. - -FreeBSD is derived from BSD, the version of UNIX\reg -developed at the University of California, Berkeley. +FreeBSD is a operating system used to power modern servers, desktops, and embedded platforms. A large community has continually developed it for more than thirty years. Its networking, security, and storage features have made FreeBSD the platform of choice for many of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded networking and storage devices. }{\size} \ifthenelse{\equal{\logo}{false}}{ \begin{minipage}{4cm} @@ -128,9 +122,8 @@ compatibility features which are still missing in othe operating systems, even some of the best commercial ones. }{5cm} \titledframe{\textsf{\textbf{Powerful Internet solutions}}}{ -FreeBSD includes what many consider the reference implementation for -TCP/IP software, the 4.4BSD TCP/IP protocol stack, thereby making it -ideal for network applications and the Internet. +FreeBSD includes a high performance networking stack +for network applications and the Internet. FreeBSD makes an ideal Internet or Intranet server. It provides robust network services under the heaviest loads and uses memory efficiently to maintain good response times for thousands of simultaneous user @@ -160,10 +153,8 @@ etc., without any noticeable speed degradation. \vspace{5mm} \titledframe{FreeBSD is easy to install}{ -FreeBSD can be installed from a variety of media including CD-ROM, -DVD-ROM, USB stick, -or even -directly using anonymous FTP or NFS. +FreeBSD can be installed from a variety of media including a USB Stick, +CD-ROM, or even directly using FTP or NFS. }{17.3cm} \vspace{5mm} @@ -192,15 +183,15 @@ and GNU/Linux. \titledframe{Contacts}{ \begin{itemizeflyer} -\item Web site: \url{http://www.FreeBSD.org/} -\item FreeBSD Handbook: \url{http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/handbook/} +\item Web site: \url{https://www.FreeBSD.org/} +\item FreeBSD Handbook: \url{https://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/handbook/} \end {itemizeflyer} }{17.3cm} \end{center} % % Copyrights \begin{center} -\tiny \copyright 2004-2010 The FreeBSD Project\\ +\tiny \copyright 2004-2017 The FreeBSD Project\\ \ifthenelse{\equal{\logo}{true}}{ FreeBSD and the FreeBSD Logo are registered trademarks of the FreeBSD Foundation.\\}