From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 12 23:21:04 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4C49716A4CE; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:21:04 +0000 (GMT) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 24DCA43D54; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:21:04 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from simon@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id iBCNL4hL082189; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:21:04 GMT (envelope-from simon@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from simon@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id iBCNL4P0082188; Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:21:04 GMT (envelope-from simon) Message-Id: <200412122321.iBCNL4P0082188@repoman.freebsd.org> From: "Simon L. Nielsen" Date: Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:21:04 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 12 Dec 2004 23:21:04 -0000 simon 2004-12-12 23:21:03 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls chapter.sgml Log: - Remove contractions. - Use the serial comma. - Correct spelling. PR: docs/74720 Submitted by: Joel Dahl Revision Changes Path 1.7 +11 -11 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml