From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org  Fri Oct  2 13:52:30 2015
Return-Path: <owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org>
Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org
Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org
 [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1])
 by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 51386A0D70A;
 Fri,  2 Oct 2015 13:52:30 +0000 (UTC)
 (envelope-from emaste@FreeBSD.org)
Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org
 [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0])
 (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits))
 (Client did not present a certificate)
 by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 425B01642;
 Fri,  2 Oct 2015 13:52:30 +0000 (UTC)
 (envelope-from emaste@FreeBSD.org)
Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70])
 by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id t92DqUe5015324;
 Fri, 2 Oct 2015 13:52:30 GMT (envelope-from emaste@FreeBSD.org)
Received: (from emaste@localhost)
 by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id t92DqUOg015323;
 Fri, 2 Oct 2015 13:52:30 GMT (envelope-from emaste@FreeBSD.org)
Message-Id: <201510021352.t92DqUOg015323@repo.freebsd.org>
X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: emaste set sender to
 emaste@FreeBSD.org using -f
From: Ed Maste <emaste@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 2 Oct 2015 13:52:30 +0000 (UTC)
To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org,
 svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject: svn commit: r47484 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq
X-SVN-Group: doc-head
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20
Precedence: list
List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head
 <svn-doc-head.freebsd.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/options/svn-doc-head>,
 <mailto:svn-doc-head-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/svn-doc-head/>
List-Post: <mailto:svn-doc-head@freebsd.org>
List-Help: <mailto:svn-doc-head-request@freebsd.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-doc-head>,
 <mailto:svn-doc-head-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 02 Oct 2015 13:52:30 -0000

Author: emaste (src committer)
Date: Fri Oct  2 13:52:29 2015
New Revision: 47484
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47484

Log:
  Improve wording for r47478 change
  
  Submitted by:	wblock

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Oct  2 13:47:23 2015	(r47483)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml	Fri Oct  2 13:52:29 2015	(r47484)
@@ -3460,12 +3460,12 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE</screen>
 
 	<answer>
 	  <para>&os; 10.1 and earlier executes a memory test early
-	    in the boot process.  This test takes several seconds
-	    if the system has a small amount of memory.  On systems
-	    with 10s or 100s of gigabytes of memory it can take
-	    a few minutes or more.  This test can
-	    be disabled by setting <literal>hw.memtest.tests</literal>
-	    to <literal>0</literal> in
+	    in the boot process.
+	    When the system has a small amount of memory, the test
+	    takes a few seconds.  Computers with tens or hundreds of
+	    gigabytes of memory can take several minutes to complete
+	    the test.  The memory test can be disabled by adding
+	    <literal>hw.memtest.tests=0</literal> to
 	    <filename>/boot/loader.conf</filename>.</para>
 
 	  <para>For more details, see &man.loader.conf.5;.</para>