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From: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2002 06:44:59 -0800 (PST)
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing article.sgml
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mwlucas     2002/03/11 06:44:59 PST

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing article.sgml 
  Log:
  Rewrite first three paragraphs of this article to eliminate run-on
  sentences, poor grammar, excess verbiage, etc., etc.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.475     +21 -21    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributing/article.sgml

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