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Date: Thu, 16 May 2002 19:43:30 +0300
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: [PATCH] <http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/cvs. operations.html>
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On 2002-05-15 23:29, Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com> wrote:
>            <p>Arguments to <tt class="OPTION">-D</tt> and <tt class=
>            "OPTION">-r</tt> are sticky, which means cvs will
> -          remember them later, e.g. when you do a <tt class=
> +          remember them later, <em>e.g.,</em> when you do a <tt class=
>            "COMMAND">cvs update</tt>.</p>

Isn't that a bit too much?

>          </li>
> 
> @@ -392,9 +392,9 @@
>            <p>This updates the <tt class="FILENAME">shazam</tt> file
>            or the contents of the <tt class="FILENAME">shazam</tt>
>            directory to the latest version along the branch you
> -          checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', does
> -          nothing unless the tags have moved in the repository or
> -          some other weird stuff is going on.</p>
> +          checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', this
> +          does nothing, unless the tags have moved in the repository
> +          or some other weird stuff is going on.</p>

You don't really need the whitespace change (moving 'or' at the
beginning of the last paragraph line).

You might want to make `this' mode explicit, with something like:

	If you checked out a ``point in time'', then
	<application>cvs</application> will do nothing, unless ...

What do you think?

- Giorgos


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