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Date:      Thu, 7 Mar 2013 22:06:45 -0500 (EST)
From:      Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
To:        Gabor Pali <pgj@freebsd.org>
Cc:        svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org
Subject:   Re: svn commit: r41132 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook
Message-ID:  <alpine.GSO.1.10.1303072205360.9389@multics.mit.edu>
In-Reply-To: <201303080111.r281BooK088033@svn.freebsd.org>
References:  <201303080111.r281BooK088033@svn.freebsd.org>

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On Fri, 8 Mar 2013, Gabor Pali wrote:

> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Fri Mar  8 00:39:33 2013	(r41131)
> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml	Fri Mar  8 01:11:49 2013	(r41132)
> @@ -10640,7 +10640,7 @@ as .putsy.conf and edit it.</programlist
>     <sect1 id="svn-diff">
>       <title>Using <literal>SVN</literal> to Make Patches</title>
>
> -      <para>If you can, please submit a &man.svn.1 diff; they are
> +      <para>If you can, please submit a &man.svn.1; diff they are

Moving this semicolon changes the grammar of the sentence to be invalid.
It should be restored (or possibly replaced with an em dash).

-Ben

> 	easier to handle than diffs between <quote>new and old</quote>
> 	directories.  Plus it is easier for you to see what you have
> 	changed and to update your diff if something is modified in
>



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