From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Feb 27 14:57:22 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BB32C106564A for ; Sun, 27 Feb 2011 14:57:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxout1.bln1.prohost.de (mxout1.bln1.prohost.de [213.160.84.47]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 489398FC08 for ; Sun, 27 Feb 2011 14:57:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: from Benedicts-Macbook-Pro.local (p4FC72D87.dip.t-dialin.net [79.199.45.135]) (authenticated bits=0) by mx1.bln1.prohost.de (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id p1REkYrc009104 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NO) for ; Sun, 27 Feb 2011 15:46:35 +0100 Message-ID: <4D6A63CB.7040908@FreeBSD.org> Date: Sun, 27 Feb 2011 15:46:35 +0100 From: Benedict Reuschling Organization: The FreeBSD Project User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; U; Intel Mac OS X 10.6; de; rv:1.9.2.13) Gecko/20101207 Thunderbird/3.1.7 MIME-Version: 1.0 To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org References: <20110227103645.GA53342@freefall.freebsd.org> In-Reply-To: <20110227103645.GA53342@freefall.freebsd.org> X-Enigmail-Version: 1.1.1 OpenPGP: id=4A819348 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------040602060306070705080906" X-Null-Tag: eca3520bf46e6631b9bf1c766aca893c Cc: Subject: Re: RFC: New Handbook section - HAST X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: bcr@FreeBSD.org List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 27 Feb 2011 14:57:22 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------040602060306070705080906 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-15 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Am 27.02.11 11:36, schrieb Daniel Gerzo: > Hello guys, > > I have prepared a new Handbook section covering HAST. The tech stuff > has been reviewed by Pawel and Mikolaj Golub, so from the tech point of > view it should be all correct. Unfortunately, none of us is native > English speaker, therefore I would like to ask you guys to review the > language and styling of the new section. > > The patch is attached and can be also found online at [1] and a built > version is available at [2]. > > Thanks in advance. > > [1] http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/hast.diff > [2] http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/FreeBSD/hast.html > Hi Daniel, great writeup, this will make a good addition to the Handbook once it's finished. I've found some typos and attached a diff with corrections. I'm not an english native speaker myself (and I don't play one on TV), but I think the ones I found are pretty obvious. Kind regards Benedict Reuschling FreeBSD Doc Committer The FreeBSD Documentation Project FreeBSD German Documentation Project - https://doc.bsdgroup.de -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.8 (Darwin) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iEYEARECAAYFAk1qY8EACgkQTSZQLkqBk0hgPwCfawrm5cf2303mPC/j3MnLjiRt 7ScAn3Wf3mDe43ubqKaAkCi8wxyccNA1 =B1Nq -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --------------040602060306070705080906 Content-Type: text/plain; x-mac-type="0"; x-mac-creator="0"; name="hast_typos.diff" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="hast_typos.diff" --- hast.html 2011-02-27 15:40:32.000000000 +0100 +++ hast_new.html 2011-02-27 15:40:12.000000000 +0100 @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Contributed by Daniel Gerzo. With inputs from Freddie Cash, Pawel -Jakub Davidek, Michael W. Lucas, and Viktor Petersson. +Jakub Dawidek, Michael W. Lucas, and Viktor Petersson.

18.18.1 Synopsis

@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ class="REPLACEABLE">172.16.0.2. Both of these nodes will have a dedicated hard drive /dev/ad6 of the same size for HAST operation. The -HAST pool (sometimes also reffered to as a +HAST pool (sometimes also referred to as a resource, i.e. the GEOM provider in /dev/hast/) will be called test.

@@ -458,14 +458,14 @@ 
 notify 30 {
     match "system" "IFNET";
-    match "subsustem" "carp0";
+    match "subsystem" "carp0";
     match "type" "LINK_UP";
     action "/usr/local/sbin/carp-hast-switch master";
 };
 
 notify 30 {
     match "system" "IFNET";
-    match "subsustem" "carp0";
+    match "subsystem" "carp0";
     match "type" "LINK_DOWN";
     action "/usr/local/sbin/carp-hast-switch slave";
 };
@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@
 
 
    
 
  • 
-
    Umounts the HAST pools.
    
+
    Unmounts the HAST pools.
    
 
    • 
 
 
  • 

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