From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Sep 12 16:47:36 2005 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7DD6F16A420; Mon, 12 Sep 2005 16:47:36 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from yar@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E9C043D46; Mon, 12 Sep 2005 16:47:36 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from yar@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id j8CGlaTm066527; Mon, 12 Sep 2005 16:47:36 GMT (envelope-from yar@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from yar@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.1/8.13.1/Submit) id j8CGlanW066526; Mon, 12 Sep 2005 16:47:36 GMT (envelope-from yar) Message-Id: <200509121647.j8CGlanW066526@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Yar Tikhiy Date: Mon, 12 Sep 2005 16:47:36 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/translations chapter.sgml ... X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 12 Sep 2005 16:47:36 -0000 yar 2005-09-12 16:47:36 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/translations chapter.sgml en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style chapter.sgml Log: Except for some rare cases, always use punctuation to finish a sentence at the end of a paragraph so that the readers don't think that some text is missing. Consistently use colons to finish sentences introductory to examples. Revision Changes Path 1.15 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/doc-build/chapter.sgml 1.72 +14 -14 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml 1.43 +22 -22 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-primer/chapter.sgml 1.17 +3 -3 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/structure/chapter.sgml 1.22 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/the-website/chapter.sgml 1.28 +4 -4 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/translations/chapter.sgml 1.48 +3 -3 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml