From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Jan 13 14:42:51 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 25B1785D for ; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 14:42:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dru.lavigne@att.net) Received: from nm10.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com (nm10.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com [98.139.44.137]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A3EF77FA for ; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 14:42:50 +0000 (UTC) Received: from [98.139.44.99] by nm10.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 13 Jan 2013 14:42:44 -0000 Received: from [98.139.44.89] by tm4.access.bullet.mail.sp2.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 13 Jan 2013 14:42:44 -0000 Received: from [127.0.0.1] by omp1026.access.mail.sp2.yahoo.com with NNFMP; 13 Jan 2013 14:42:44 -0000 X-Yahoo-Newman-Property: ymail-3 X-Yahoo-Newman-Id: 528038.38191.bm@omp1026.access.mail.sp2.yahoo.com Received: (qmail 87830 invoked by uid 60001); 13 Jan 2013 14:42:44 -0000 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=att.net; s=s1024; t=1358088164; bh=tdRyL6ZtyApQxLZovOAzmuThEWIFVh8yZUUG1IbcsXQ=; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:Message-ID:Date:From:Subject:To:Cc:MIME-Version:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=AVrwsm3bIgutipnOx+XT2SmoIbUz3b17GmiUAS/2THYTMxivGqgDlikBwZtJtRqHbh+6B21j4QZ8OLkugH95VYkD1CtNDcvTbL5PBOJkqPrsVamJGgKItewWgFTB3ag7M4YlR8zPAxC6j4lSPhbqpU1Xx7zCaqNPRK8DQ1vr8M0= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; q=dns; c=nofws; s=s1024; d=att.net; h=X-YMail-OSG:Received:X-Rocket-MIMEInfo:X-Mailer:Message-ID:Date:From:Subject:To:Cc:MIME-Version:Content-Type:Content-Transfer-Encoding; b=i7fX44KEtvcM2HGqlXJXWGAa79eiw2HwKEkwvAEOGXcJ9DVOIgExNOjwqkmG84EpE9ssldeQBhLF1+PocAAnjW5iuuQxzaigeYPq67ENMIgQ7TWg/eQEXWLPn2HeT6z76571JcOB5iYxU1RgVCf11kbbsMS5h4KDDuv8vOFMnhA=; X-YMail-OSG: F4IaXoAVM1nBa.U_zJcQcuaqeUUofVCO_tmzLNLYBw0tw2Y Pabmy1UQOcvQHM15X9i59EUJ7ecs9JlHVxwHLc0SFD1gJb08IlyzBeCzp2Xm LeOCfExwz0SJmhA95kPtYWvVg.xta4O92lT27elIFYjMP7bXkvRWrOPR5N1h DgMshKIRn9Rq3WHux1mDjUCCPcLHFpE_7MNLUKGDffAHe9SwaCXZKUcnS4E8 tuTQuJYbgxBhmCE_ispGaT.XLTBqmx6_v9x0FYXfZ2vz_s4GV61DADCN0sF5 MftOjjKoCfkjwA2R3pD8wUr1K0XawnLIb_UBMzaliZcmOwq15AAUDGDBQeXX Fqez8.K5dc4AfHzCBFUugzDlwXG1ueIHpZDHhZJodwKf7aXV518QJ2DFjLVU KFDRmxCWsVCHSTSYG3z7s4is8lMn6urOtO19MPCr1CrMo5E4Zbwf6EHIzer4 IKS7A_g-- Received: from [99.98.82.135] by web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com via HTTP; Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:42:44 PST X-Rocket-MIMEInfo: 001.001, Cj4gT24gRnJpLCBKYW4gMTEsIDIwMTMgYXQgMDI6MzE6NTJQTSAtMDgwMCwgRHJ1IExhdmlnbmUKPiB3cm90ZToKPiA.IEF0dGFjaGVkIGlzIHRoZSBzdm4gZGlmZiBmb3IgdGhlIFgxMSBjaGFwdGVyLiBUaGlzCj4gcmVwcmVzZW50cyBhCj4gPiBjb21wbGV0ZSBjb250ZW50IHVwZGF0ZSBvZiB0aGlzIGNoYXB0ZXIuCj4gPiAKPiA.IElnb3IgaXMgbW9zdGx5IGhhcHB5LiBJIHRoaW5rIHRoZSByZW1haW5pbmcgaW5kZW50Cj4gZXJyb3JzIGFyZSBmYWxzZQo.ID4gd2FybmluZ3MgYXMgdGhleSBvbmx5IG9jY3UBMAEBAQE- X-Mailer: YahooMailClassic/15.1.2 YahooMailWebService/0.8.130.494 Message-ID: <1358088164.72486.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 06:42:44 -0800 (PST) From: Dru Lavigne Subject: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 14:42:51 -0000 =0A> On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 02:31:52PM -0800, Dru Lavigne=0A> wrote:=0A> >= Attached is the svn diff for the X11 chapter. This=0A> represents a=0A> > = complete content update of this chapter.=0A> > =0A> > Igor is mostly happy.= I think the remaining indent=0A> errors are false=0A> > warnings as they o= nly occur when an inline tag is in=0A> the previous=0A> > .=0A> > =0A= > > I did not verify the widescreen settings. I think the=0A> i810 section = is=0A> > correct. The KDM section needs more content. Other than=0A> that, = it is a=0A> > decent first pass at bringing this chapter into the=0A> 21st = century.=0A> >=0A> =0A> Some thoughts:=0A> =0A> - the whole diff will be di= fficult to read for a translator:=0A> section=0A> =A0 moves, whitespace & c= ontent changes, etc.=A0=0A> It will be important to=0A> =A0 commit in separ= ate parts: for example: 1st section=0A> moves/removals, 2nd=0A> =A0 additio= n & content changes and 3rd=0A> whitespace/indentation changes;=0A> =0A> - = you removed the prerequisite of knowing how to use ports,=0A> I think it's= =0A> =A0 important to know how to get a ports tree before=0A> using the por= ts;=0A> =0A> - you removed the way to get a localized keyboard for people= =0A> not using a=0A> =A0 desktop manager.=A0 Well this configuration is not= =0A> easy to guess for a=0A> =A0 newcomer.=A0 Maybe it can be kept somewher= e in the=0A> chapter.=0A> =0A> - What is # in Crtl+Alt+F#?=0A=0A=0APlease n= ote that the whitespace changes were sent as a separate patch ([patch] whit= e space only fix for handbook x11 chapter) on the 10th. It is my understand= ing that the first patch will be applied to the handbook repo while the sec= ond content patch will most likely be applied to the print edition repo.=0A= =0ACheers,=0A=0ADru