From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Mar 19 02:05:11 1998 Return-Path: Received: (from majordom@localhost) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) id CAA29634 for freebsd-doc-outgoing; Thu, 19 Mar 1998 02:05:11 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG) Received: from symbionics.co.uk (symsun3.symbionics.co.uk [194.32.100.60]) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) with SMTP id CAA29610 for ; Thu, 19 Mar 1998 02:04:57 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from dmlb@ragnet.demon.co.uk) Received: from sympc287.symbionics.co.uk by symbionics.co.uk (4.1/SMI-4.1) id AA18539; Thu, 19 Mar 98 10:03:33 GMT Message-Id: <9803191003.AA18539@symbionics.co.uk> Comments: Authenticated sender is From: "Duncan Barclay" To: Sue Blake Date: Thu, 19 Mar 1998 09:59:36 +0000 Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7BIT Subject: Re: doc "renovation" project volunteer Reply-To: dmlb@ragnet.demon.co.uk Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG In-Reply-To: <19980319163714.47520@welearn.com.au> References: ; from John Kenagy on Wed, Mar 18, 1998 at 10:58:34PM -0600 X-Mailer: Pegasus Mail for Win32 (v2.53/R1) Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org > Date: Thu, 19 Mar 1998 16:37:15 +1100 > From: Sue Blake > To: John Kenagy > Cc: Annelise Anderson , freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG > Subject: Re: doc "renovation" project volunteer > I have volunteered before to review any documentation that is offered, but > it would be even better to have more than one newbie perspective. What I > propose is to announce in freebsd-newbies when specific help is required, > coordinate that help, and report back here. On the flip side, if newbies say > they're wanting something in particular in the way of docs I can gather > their thoughts together, present them here, and report back to -newbies. > That way you don't get bored or annoyed by incompetence and they don't get > made to feel small or under scrutiny. Of course this doesn't preclude any > other methods, but provides a workable structure. > -- > > Regards, > -*Sue*- Hi I'm taking you up on your offer to review docs. Can you have a look at the Usenet tutorial that I have written. It isn't finsihed yet, but I would like feedback as to style and whether it is logical etc. http://www.ragnet.demon.co.uk/mynews.html I will try and put a newer version on later today at about 6pm UK time. Things I am in the process of writing at the moment: - the Building/Configuring Inn chapter is being updated to the latest port. - the Building/Configuring Suck chapter ditto. - all output from the examples will be re run on a clean machine so they are up to date. - putting files on my website where I say they should be! I wouldn't suggest that you actually try using it yet. Once those things are done the primer should stand alone okay and be ready for a link on the tutorials page so that people can get things up and running. Next things to do are: - expand and write the inn overvierw properly. - expand the suck overview. - work out how to and write about re installing - more what happens if it goes wrong stuff, (this will have to grow organically as people have problems!) the system with an existing new setup. - talk about cleverer things to do suck kill files news overview database linking crosspostings spam - others? Thanks Duncan To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message