From owner-freebsd-doc Thu May 16 10:10:21 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from pittgoth.com (14.zlnp1.xdsl.nauticom.net [209.195.149.111]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7305137B40D for ; Thu, 16 May 2002 10:10:17 -0700 (PDT) Received: from unknown (lcl234.zbzoom.net [208.236.36.234]) by pittgoth.com (8.12.3/8.12.3) with SMTP id g4GH8u4T008744; Thu, 16 May 2002 13:10:11 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Thu, 16 May 2002 13:11:22 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes To: Giorgos Keramidas Cc: pepper@reppep.com, FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Message-Id: <20020516131122.516afea5.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20020516164330.GA96701@hades.hell.gr> References: <20020516164330.GA96701@hades.hell.gr> X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 0.7.5claws (GTK+ 1.2.10; i386-portbld-freebsd4.6) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On Thu, 16 May 2002 19:43:30 +0300 Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2002-05-15 23:29, Chris Pepper wrote: > > You don't really need the whitespace change (moving 'or' at the > beginning of the last paragraph line). > > You might want to make `this' mode explicit, with something like: > > If you checked out a ``point in time'', then > cvs will do nothing, unless ... > > What do you think? I think, and not to discourage contributions, as we need them, that Chris review the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer before this change be evaulated. The only reason I say this, is because it seems more like this document is getting a modification in its html state over the sgml state it should be. Chris, could you please review it at http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer so you can have a better understanding of DocBook, SGML, and the wonderful ways its put to use in the primer. > > - Giorgos > -- Tom (Darklogik) Rhodes www.FreeBSD.org -The Power To Serve www.Pittgoth.com -Pittgoth Discussion Portal trhodes@{Pittgoth.com, FreeBSD.org} PGP key by www: http://www.pittgoth.com/~darklogik/darklogik.key To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message