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To: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
Subject: Re: svn commit: r43709 -
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On Fri, 31 Jan 2014, Benedict Reuschling wrote:

> Author: bcr
> Date: Fri Jan 31 20:55:48 2014
> New Revision: 43709
> URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43709
>
> Log:
>  Minor corrections and wording fixes.
>  The section on zfs send over SSH needs to be more clear about what exactly
>  needs to happen on each system for this to work.  This will be done in a
>  separate commit.
>
>  Submitted by:	bjk@
>
> Modified:
>  projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
>
> Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 31 18:43:29 2014	(r43708)
> +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml	Fri Jan 31 20:55:48 2014	(r43709)
> @@ -1251,16 +1251,16 @@ tank    custom:costcenter  -
>       <title>ZFS Replication</title>
>
> 	<para>After these security measures have been put into place
> -	  and <literal>root</literal> can connect passwordless via SSH
> -	  to the receiving system, the encrypted stream can be sent
> -	  using the following commands:</para>
> +	  and <literal>root</literal> can connect via passwordless via

There is an extra "via" at the end of the line.