From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Dec 24 20:33:38 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 50605E7A; Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:33:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from hrs@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 32D7A8FC0A; Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:33:38 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id qBOKXcFn075909; Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:33:38 GMT (envelope-from hrs@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from hrs@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id qBOKXcms075908; Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:33:38 GMT (envelope-from hrs@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201212242033.qBOKXcms075908@svn.freebsd.org> From: Hiroki Sato Date: Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:33:38 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-9@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r244664 - stable/9/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes X-SVN-Group: stable-9 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 24 Dec 2012 20:33:38 -0000 Author: hrs Date: Mon Dec 24 20:33:37 2012 New Revision: 244664 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/244664 Log: Fix various grammatical errors. Submitted by: bjk Modified: stable/9/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Modified: stable/9/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/9/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Mon Dec 24 14:22:52 2012 (r244663) +++ stable/9/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Mon Dec 24 20:33:37 2012 (r244664) @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ Kernel Changes - &os; Jail subsystem now supports + The &os; Jail subsystem now supports mounting &man.devfs.5;, &man.nullfs.5;, and ZFS filesystem inside a jail. New &man.jail.8; parameters allow.mount.devfs, @@ -178,9 +178,9 @@ A new &man.loader.8; tunable kern.eventtimer.activetick has been added. - This tunable is to specify whether each hardclock tick should - be run on every active CPU or only one. Setting it to - 0, the number of interrupts can be reduced + This tunable specifies whether each hardclock tick should + be run on every active CPU or only one. By setting it to + 0, the total number of interrupts can be reduced on SMP machines. The default value is 1. @@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ &man.madvise.2; except that it operates on a file descriptor instead of a memory region. - The &man.filemon.4; pseudo device has + The &man.filemon.4; pseudo-device has been added. This allows a process to collect file operations data of its children. @@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ supports kernel profiling by using &man.kgmon.8;. The &os; Linux ABI compatibility layer - now supports linux_fadvice64() and - linux_fadvice64_64() system call. + now supports the linux_fadvise64() and + linux_fadvise64_64() system calls. The default value of the &man.loader.8; tunable hw.memtest.tests is now @@ -211,23 +211,23 @@ A new &man.loader.8; tunable kern.msgbuf_show_timestamp has been added. - When this is enabled, timestamp is added to each line of the + When it is enabled, a timestamp is added to each line of the system message buffer. The default value is 0 (disabled). The &man.null.4; and &man.zero.4; pseudo - device driver now supports non-blocking mode via &man.fcntl.2; + device driver now supports non-blocking mode via the &man.fcntl.2; system call. The &os; &man.sched.ule.4; scheduler has - been improved on CPU load balancing of SMT (Simultaneous - MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives 10-15% performance improvement + been improved for CPU load balancing on SMT (Simultaneous + MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives a 10-15% performance improvement when the number of threads is lesser than the number of logical CPUs. PREEMPTION kernel option is - now enabled in GENERIC kernel. + arch="sparc64">The PREEMPTION kernel option is + now enabled in the GENERIC kernel. A new &man.sysctl.8; variable security.bsd.unprivileged_idprio has been @@ -242,11 +242,11 @@ Boot Loader Changes The &man.boot0cfg.8; utility now - supports configuration of PXE boot via + supports configuration of PXE boot via the boot0 boot block temporarily on the next boot. The slice number 6 or a keyword PXE can be specified to enable - PXE boot in the option. + PXE boot using the option. The &os; &man.boot.8; block now supports /boot/config in addition to @@ -262,27 +262,27 @@ LBA for the metadata. The zfsboot boot - block and zfsloader supports + block and zfsloader support filesystems within a ZFS storage pool. In - zfsloader, ZFS device name format now - is + zfsloader, the ZFS device name format is now zfs:pool/fs - and fully qualified file path is + and the fully qualified file path format is zfs:pool/fs:/path/to/file. - The zfsboot accepts kernel/loader name - in a format + The zfsboot boot block accepts the + kernel/loader name in the format pool:fs:path/to/file or, as before, pool:path/to/file. In the latter case a default filesystem is used (the pool - root or bootfs property). The - zfsboot passes GUIDs of the selected + root or a filesystem with the bootfs property). The + zfsboot boot block passes + the GUIDs of the selected storage pool and dataset to zfsloader to be used as its defaults. - The &os;/sparc64 now - supports booting from ZFS via zfsboot boot block and - zfsloader. For example, the following commands create a + &os;/sparc64 now + supports booting from ZFS via the zfsboot boot block and + zfsloader. For example, the following commands create a mirrored storage pool rpool consisting of da0a and da0b and configure the storage pool as the root filesystem: @@ -326,10 +326,10 @@ supports attaching multiple instances. The adm1030(4) driver - for G4 MDD fan now shows its PWM parameter in the device + for G4 MDD fans now shows its PWM parameter in the device's &man.sysctl.8; variable. - The cesa(4) driver for + The cesa(4) driver for the Marvell crypto engine and security accelerator has been added. @@ -337,35 +337,35 @@ driver now supports PowerPC G4+ (MPC745x/MPC744x). The &man.hwpmc.4; - driver now supports Intel Sandy Bridge + driver now supports the Intel Sandy Bridge microarchitecture. The &man.hwpmc.4; driver now supports software events. Simultaneous usage of software PMC and hardware PMC is allowed. - The pcf8563(4) driver for NXP + The pcf8563(4) driver for the NXP (Philips) PCF8563 RTC has been added. &os;/powerpc now - supports PWM-controlled fans found on PowerMac SMU (System + supports the PWM-controlled fans found on the PowerMac SMU (System Management Unit). - &os;/arm now supports Atmel + &os;/arm now supports the Atmel SAM9XE family of microcontrollers. The following &man.sysctl.8; variables have been added: kern.proc.env for environment strings, kern.proc.auxv - for ELF auxiliary vectors from a process stack, + for ELF auxiliary vectors from a process's stack, kern.proc.groups for process groups, kern.proc.rlimit for process resource - limits, and kern.proc.ps_strings for - ps_strings location, kern.proc.osrel for - osreldate for process binary. + limits, kern.proc.ps_strings for the + ps_strings location, and kern.proc.osrel for + the osreldate of the process's binary. The &man.usb.4; driver now - handles suspend and resume correctly with no need of reloading + handles suspend and resume correctly with no need to reload the kernel module. A bug in the &man.xhci.4; (USB 3.0) @@ -373,24 +373,24 @@ hubs. The &man.viawd.4; driver, which - supports watchdog timer found in VIA south bridge (VT8251, + supports the watchdog timer found in VIA south bridges (VT8251, CX700, VX800, VX855, VX900), has been added. The &man.wbwd.4; driver, which - supports watchdog timer found in Winbond Super I/O chips, + supports the watchdog timer found in Winbond Super I/O chips, has been added. Multimedia Support The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, - which supports GEM, KMS, and works with new generations of + which supports GEM and KMS and works with new generations of GPUs such as IronLake, SandyBridge, and IvyBridge, has been added. The &man.agp.4; driver now supports SandyBridge and IvyBridge CPU northbridges. The &man.snd.hda.4; driver has been - updated. It now supports HDMI, new volume control, + updated. It now supports and provides HDMI, new volume control, automatic recording source selection, runtime reconfiguration, more then 4 PCM devices on a controller, multichannel recording, additional playback/record @@ -405,19 +405,19 @@ headers in the &man.snd.emu10kx.4;, &man.snd.maestro3.4;, and &man.snd.csa.4; drivers have been replaced with BSD-licensed one. These drivers are now fully - BSD-licensed and included in GENERIC + BSD-licensed and included in the GENERIC kernel on &os;/amd64 and &os;/i386. Network Interface Support - A bug in &man.ae.4; driver which could - prevent from working under certain conditions has been + A bug in the &man.ae.4; driver which could + prevent it from working under certain conditions has been fixed. The &man.axe.4; driver now supports - TX/RX checksum offloading support for ASIX AX88772B + TX/RX checksum offloading support for the ASIX AX88772B controller. The &man.bce.4; driver has been improved: @@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ - A bug has been fixed. It could + A bug has been fixed which could prevent IPMI from working when the interface was marked as down. @@ -439,29 +439,29 @@ which allow the controller to perform MDIO type accesses to a remote transceiver by using message pages defined through MRBE (MultiRate Backplane Ethernet). This is - found on machines such as Dell PowerEdge M610 + found on machines such as the Dell PowerEdge M610 Blade. - The &man.bge.4; and brgphy(4) driver have been + The &man.bge.4; and brgphy(4) drivers have been improved: - A bug which could prevent the - DMA functionality from working correctly, has been + A bug which could prevent + DMA functionality from working correctly has been fixed. - It now works with PCI-X BCM 5704 - controller that connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X bridge. + It now works with a PCI-X BCM 5704 + controller that is connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X bridge. It now supports - BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY, and BCM 57780 1000BASE-T + the BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY, and the BCM 57780 1000BASE-T media interface. @@ -475,25 +475,25 @@ The &man.cxgbe.4; and - &man.cxgb.4; driver has been updated to firmware version - 1.5.2.0. This now supports device configuration via a + &man.cxgb.4; drivers have been updated to firmware version + 1.5.2.0. They now support device configuration via a plain text configuration file, IPv6 hardware checksumming, - IPv6 TSO and LRO, loadfw command in the - cxgbetool(8) utility which allows to install a firmware to - the card, &man.sysctl.8; variables under + IPv6 TSO and LRO, a loadfw command in the + cxgbetool(8) utility which allows installing a firmware to + the card, and &man.sysctl.8; variables under dev.t4nex.N.misc for various information. The &man.dc.4; driver now supports NVIDIA (ULi) M5261/M5263 PCI FastEthernet controllers, which - are found on ULi M1563 South Bridge and M1689 Bridge. + are found on the ULi M1563 South Bridge and M1689 Bridge. The &man.et.4; driver now works on all platforms. A bug which could prevent &man.altq.4; support from working has been fixed. A new - &man.sysctl.8; variables under + &man.sysctl.8; variable under dev.et.N.stats - have been added for hardware MAC statistics. + has been added for hardware MAC statistics. The &man.igb.4; driver has been updated to version 2.3.4. It now supports newer i210/i211 @@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ supports device hints hint.miibus.N.phymask for PHY addresses being probed. This is useful to manually - probe PHYs which do not implement basic register set of + probe PHYs which do not implement basic the register set of IEEE 802.3. Also, the &man.miibus.4; driver has been changed to a hinted bus, allowing to add child devices via hints and to set their attach arguments in addition to @@ -523,14 +523,14 @@ National DP83849. The &man.oce.4; driver, which - supports Emulex OneConnect 10Gbit Ethernet card, has been + supports Emulex OneConnect 10Gbit Ethernet cards, has been added. The &man.ral.4; driver now supports Ralink RT2800 and RT3000 chipsets. The &man.re.4; driver now - supports RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A bug + supports the RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A bug which could prevent WoL (Wake-on-LAN) from working on RTL8168E has been fixed. @@ -541,20 +541,20 @@ supports 10Gb Ethernet adapters based on Solarflare SFC9000 family controllers, has been added. - The smcphy(4); driver now supports + The smcphy(4) driver now supports the Seeq Technology 80220 PHY. This is found on Adaptec - AIC-6915 Starfire Ethernet controller supported by the + AIC-6915 Starfire Ethernet controllers supported by the &man.sf.4; driver. The &man.ti.4; driver now - supports &man.altq.4; framework, reporting link-state - change, and &man.sysctl.8; variables under + supports the &man.altq.4; framework, reporting link-state + changes, and &man.sysctl.8; variables under dev.ti.N for - the interrupt moderation parameters. + interrupt moderation parameters. - A bug in &man.ti.4; driver which could - prevent it from working correctly with PAE - kernel option, has been fixed. + A bug in the &man.ti.4; driver which could + prevent it from working correctly with the PAE + kernel option has been fixed. The &man.vge.4; driver has been updated to improve its link establishment and link-state @@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ The &man.xnb.4; Xen Paravirtualized Backend Ethernet Driver (netback) has been updated. This is - attached via newbus framework and works properly in both + attached via the newbus framework and works properly in both HVM and PVM mode. @@ -573,8 +573,8 @@ Network Protocols - The &man.if.bridge.4; pseudo interface - now supports reporting link-state change depending on status + The &man.if.bridge.4; pseudo-interface + now supports reporting link-state changes depending on the status of the member interfaces. The table argument @@ -584,23 +584,23 @@ skipto tablearg ip from any to any via table(42) in - &os; &man.ip6.4; protocol stack now has been improved in terms + The &os; &man.ip6.4; protocol stack has been improved in terms of its performance. Benchmarking can be found at . - &os; &man.ip6.4; protocol stack now - supports multiple FIB. + The &os; &man.ip6.4; protocol stack now + supports multiple FIBs. An IPv6 default route configured via Router Advertisement messages is now reinstalled correctly when the default route is manually removed and then another - same RA message is received. + RA message is received for the same route. A bug which could return an incorrect - value of IPV6_MULTICASE_HOPS socket option + value for the IPV6_MULTICASE_HOPS socket option has been fixed. - A new &man.sysctl.8; + A new &man.sysctl.3; name NET_RT_IFLISTL has been added. This queries the address list and works on extended and extensible structures if_msghdrl and @@ -609,39 +609,39 @@ The &man.netmap.4; fast packet I/O framework has been added. The &man.em.4;, lem(4), - &man.igb.4;. and &man.re.4; drivers now support this + &man.igb.4;, and &man.re.4; drivers now support this framework. The technical details can be found at . - &os; &man.sctp.4; protocol stack now + The &os; &man.sctp.4; protocol stack now supports a new &man.sysctl.8; variable net.inet.sctp.blackhole. If this is set to 1, no ABORT is sent back in response to an incoming INIT. If this is set to 2, no - ABORT is sent back in response to an out - of the blue packet. If set to 0 + ABORT is sent back in response to an + out-of-the-blue packet. If set to 0 (the default), ABORTs are sent. A bug which could cause a system panic when SCTP_RECVINFO or - SCTP_NXTINFO is specified to - &man.getsockopt.2; system call, has been fixed. + SCTP_NXTINFO is specified to the + &man.getsockopt.2; system call has been fixed. - &os; &man.sctp.4; protocol stack now - supports SCTP_REMOTE_UDP_ENCAPS_PORT + The &os; &man.sctp.4; protocol stack now + supports the SCTP_REMOTE_UDP_ENCAPS_PORT socket option. - SO_PROTOCOL and + The SO_PROTOCOL and SO_PROTOTYPE socket options have been - added. These returns the socket protocol number. + added. These return the socket protocol number. - TCP_KEEPINIT, + The TCP_KEEPINIT, TCP_KEEPIDLE, TCP_KEEPINTVL, and TCP_KEEPCNT socket options have been - added. These allow to control initial timeout, idle time, - idle resend interval, and idle send count in a per-socket + added. These allow controlling initial timeout, idle time, + idle resend interval, and idle send count on a per-socket basis. @@ -658,7 +658,7 @@ This is enabled by default. The new &man.cam.4;-based &man.ata.4; - driver now supports old &man.loader.8; tunables, + driver now supports old &man.loader.8; tunables hw.ata.ata_dma and hw.ata.atapi_dma, for backward compatibility. @@ -686,8 +686,8 @@ The &man.cd.4; driver now supports Audio CDs in the same way as &man.acd.4; did. It will - report 2352-byte sector to &man.geom.4; subsystem and use - READ CD command for reading the data. + report a 2352-byte sector size to the &man.geom.4; subsystem and use + the READ CD command for reading the data. This fixes an interoperability issue with multimedia/vlc. @@ -742,15 +742,15 @@ When it was NONE, the device did not - report the logical block provisioning support via respective + report logical block provisioning support via respective VPD pages. One can set a specific method for testing and it will be disabled automatically when not supported on the device. The MIRROR &man.geom.4; class now supports - BIO_DELETE. This means - TRIM command will be issued on the + BIO_DELETE. This means the + TRIM command will be issued on supported devices when deleting data. The @@ -762,37 +762,37 @@ metadata, and add, remove, fail, restore, configure - subcommands in &man.gmultipath.8; utility to manage the + subcommands in the &man.gmultipath.8; utility to manage the configured paths. The PART_LDM &man.geom.4; class has - been added. This partition scheme supports for Logical Disk + been added. This partition scheme has support for Logical Disk Manager, which is also known as dynamic volumes in Microsoft Windows NT. Note that JBOD, RAID0, and RAID5 volumes are not supported yet. - PART_MBR + The PART_MBR &man.geom.4; class now allows a primary or extended Linux swap partition to be used as the system dump device. The RAID &man.geom.4; class is now - included in GENERIC kernel. + included in the GENERIC kernel. The RAID &man.geom.4; class now supports disks with over 2TB capacity - for Intel metadata format. + for the Intel metadata format. The RAID - &man.geom.4; class now supports DDF metadata format, which + &man.geom.4; class now supports the DDF metadata format, which is defined in the SNIA Common RAID Disk Data Format Specification v2.0. The UNCOMPRESS &man.geom.4; class and the &man.mkulzma.8; utility have been added. This class - supports lzma compressed images like + supports lzma compressed images like the UZIP &man.geom.4; class and the &man.mkuzip.8; utility. @@ -808,11 +808,11 @@ been fixed. The &man.ixgbe.4; driver now supports - Intel X540 adapter. + the Intel X540 adapter. - A bug in &man.mfi.4; driver has been - fixed. It could cause some inconsistency due to missing of - interrupt acknowledge and output the following log + A bug in the &man.mfi.4; driver has been + fixed. It could cause some inconsistencies due to missed + interrupt acknowledgements and output the following log message: mfi0: COMMAND 0xffffffXXXXXXXXXX TIMEOUT AFTER XX SECONDS @@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ It now supports a timeout on positive name cache entries on the client side. A new mount option nametimeo has been added - and set to 60 (in second) by + and set to 60 (in seconds) by default. @@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ process writes to an mmap-backed file on an NFS filesystem, flushing changes to the data could fail under some circumstances such as errors due to - permission mismatch and this failure could not detected + permission mismatch, and this failure could not be detected as an error. A new &man.sysctl.8; variable vfs.nfs.nfs_keep_dirty_on_error has been added to control the behavior on the client side @@ -874,12 +874,12 @@ The &man.nfsv4.4; filesystem now - supports a new &man.sysctl.8; variable + supports a &man.sysctl.8; variable vfs.nfsd.disable_checkutf8. This - disables the check for a UTF-8 compliance in the + disables the check for UTF-8 compliance in filenames. This is disabled by default. Note that - enabling this may help some interoperability issue but - results in an NFSv4 server that is non-RFC 3530 + enabling this may help wht some interoperability issues but + results in an NFSv4 server that is not RFC 3530 compliant. @@ -888,28 +888,28 @@ experimental implementation anymore. The &man.tmpfs.5; filesystem now - supports a new &man.sysctl.8; variable - vfs.tmpfs.memory_reserved to set amount + supports a &man.sysctl.8; variable + vfs.tmpfs.memory_reserved to set the amount of required free pages when &man.tmpfs.5; attempts to allocate a new node. - &os; ZFS filesystem has been - updated by merging improvements in illumos project. The + &os;'s ZFS filesystem has been + updated by merging improvements from the illumos project. The following changes are made: New properties, clones and written, have been added. - &man.zfs.8; send command - now reports estimated size of the stream. + The &man.zfs.8; send command + now reports an estimated size of the stream. - &man.zfs.8; destroy command - now reports estimated space which would be reclaimed when - flag is specified. + The &man.zfs.8; destroy command + now reports an estimate of the space which would be reclaimed, + when is specified. - &man.zfs.8; get command now - supports + The &man.zfs.8; get command now + supports the flag to specify the data type. @@ -919,7 +919,7 @@ correctly when using ZFS as the root filesystem. The script is located at /usr/src/tools/tools/zfsboottest.sh and - it uses zfsboottest binary program in the + it uses the zfsboottest binary program in the same directory. The binary program can be built and installed by the @@ -937,7 +937,7 @@ The &man.sysctl.8; variable vfs.zfs.txg.timeout has been changed from - read-only to writable one. + read-only to writable. @@ -948,7 +948,7 @@ because it was deprecated years ago. The &man.camcontrol.8; utility now - supports fwdownload subcommand for firmware + supports a fwdownload subcommand for firmware update on SCSI devices from Hitachi, HP, IBM, Plextor, Quantum, and Seagate. This subcommand will reprogram the firmware on devices connected over an ATA/SATA transport. @@ -963,11 +963,11 @@ The &man.dump.8; utility now uses 53 characters for the device names in - /etc/dumpdates. This was limited to 32 + /etc/dumpdates. This was previously limited to 32 characters. The &man.fetch.1; utility now correctly - supports percent-encoded user and password part in a + supports a percent-encoded user and password part in a URL. The &man.fdlopen.3; function has been @@ -975,50 +975,50 @@ shared object by file descriptor. The &man.fopen.3; function now supports - (an exclusive create-and-open mode) option - in ISO/IEC 9899:2011, C11 standard. + the (an exclusive create-and-open mode) option + in the ISO/IEC 9899:2011 and C11 standards. A bug in the &man.gcc.1; compiler has been fixed. It could lead to incorrect calculations when - flag is specified. + is specified. - The &man.hastd.8; daemon now supports to - specify filename of the process ID file in + The &man.hastd.8; daemon now supports + specifying the filename of its process ID file in &man.hast.conf.5;. The &man.ifconfig.8; utility now - supports vlanhwcsum parameter to set or + supports a vlanhwcsum parameter to set or reset checksum offloading capability on VLANs. A bug in the &man.ifconfig.8; utility which could display an error message in a jail with no IPv6 - support, has been fixed. + support has been fixed. The &man.ifconfig.8; utility now - supports carp + supports a carp state parameter to set the state to backup or master forcibly. - The &man.jail.8; utility now supports + The &man.jail.8; utility now supports a configuration file (&man.jail.conf.5;) for complex configurations. - The &man.kdump.1; utility now supports + The &man.kdump.1; utility now supports a option to accept either a process ID or a thread ID. - The &man.kenv.1; utility now supports + The &man.kenv.1; utility now supports a flag to display an entry in - name=value format, and + name=value format, and a flag to display only the name. - The &man.kldload.8; utility now supports + The &man.kldload.8; utility now supports a flag to ignore the error status when the specified module is already loaded. libedit has - been updated to NetBSD snapshot as of 28 December, + been updated to a NetBSD snapshot as of 28 December, 2009. &man.libmap.conf.5; now supports @@ -1046,15 +1046,15 @@ a option to control limits for the specified process. - The &man.pciconf.8; utility now supports - flag to display PCI error details in the + The &man.pciconf.8; utility now supports a + flag to display PCI error details in listing mode. When this is specified, the status of any error bits in the PCI status register and PCI-express device status register will be displayed. It also lists any errors indicated by version 1 of PCI-express Advanced Error Reporting (AER). - The &man.procstat.1; utility now shows + The &man.procstat.1; utility now shows the superpage mapping flag when displaying process virtual memory mappings. @@ -1065,7 +1065,7 @@ display resource limits. A bug in the &man.remquo.3; functions - that the quotient did not always have the correct sign when + where the quotient did not always have the correct sign when the remainder was 0, and another bug that the remainder and quotient were both off by a bit in certain cases involving subnormal remainders, have been fixed. Note @@ -1073,11 +1073,11 @@ i386. The &man.rtld.1; run-time linker now - supports GCC's RELRO (RElocation Read-Only). This prevents + supports GCC's RELRO (RElocation Read-Only). This prevents the GOT (Global Offset Table) from being overwritten. The &man.rtld.1; run-time linker now - supports GNU hash section (DT_GNU_HASH), + supports a GNU hash section (DT_GNU_HASH), which is a replacement of optional ELF hash section. The &man.setbuf.1; utility and @@ -1086,10 +1086,10 @@ stdio streams. The &man.top.1; utility now correctly - supports per-thread I/O statistics of ZFS in option. - The &man.unzip.1; utility now supports + The &man.unzip.1; utility now supports a option for zipinfo. The &man.xlocale.3; API has been @@ -1105,7 +1105,7 @@ A new variable daily_status_zfs_zpool_list_enable has - been added. It controls whether listing all of the ZFS + been added. It controls whether or not to list all of the ZFS pools in periodic/daily/404.status-zfs. The default value is YES. @@ -1118,13 +1118,13 @@ &man.rc.8; Scripts - rc.d/nfsd script - now sets vfs.nfsd.server_max_nfsvers + The rc.d/nfsd script + now sets the vfs.nfsd.server_max_nfsvers &man.sysctl.8; variable to 4 when nfsv4_server_enable is set to YES. - A backward compatibility issue when + A backwards compatibility issue when both ipv6_enable=YES and ipv6_gateway_enable=YES are defined at the same time has been fixed. @@ -1153,12 +1153,12 @@ &man.bsdtar.1;, and &man.cpio.1; have been updated to version 2.8.5. - libpcap - library have been updated to 1.2.1. + The libpcap + library has been updated to 1.2.1. libstdc++ - have been updated to rev 135556 of - gcc-4_2-branch (LGPLv2-licensed + has been updated to revision 135556 of the + gcc-4_2-branch (the last LGPLv2-licensed version). The LLVM @@ -1171,10 +1171,10 @@ has been updated to version 5.1. OpenSSL has - been updated to 0.9.8x. + been updated to version 0.9.8x. - tcpdump - (&man.tcpdump.1;) utility has been updated to 4.2.1. + The tcpdump + (&man.tcpdump.1;) utility has been updated to version 4.2.1. The TENEX C shell (&man.tcsh.1;) has been updated to version @@ -1184,8 +1184,8 @@ database has been updated to the tzdata2012a release. - zlib - library have been updated to 1.2.7. + The zlib + library has been updated to version 1.2.7. @@ -1196,9 +1196,9 @@ role="package">x11/kde4) has been updated to 4.8.4. - Issues that &os; - installation CDROM image caused a panic, and did not - recognized on OpenBIOS-based environment like QEMU, have been + Issues where the &os; + installation CDROM image caused a panic, and was not + recognized on OpenBIOS-based environments like QEMU, have been fixed. @@ -1207,22 +1207,22 @@ Upgrading from previous releases of &os; - Upgrading using freebsd-update(8) or a source-based + <title>Upgrading using &man.freebsd-update.8; or a source-based procedure Beginning with &os; 6.2-RELEASE, binary upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the various security branches) are supported using the &man.freebsd-update.8; utility. The binary upgrade procedure - will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as a - unmodified GENERIC kernel distributed as a part of an official - &os; release. The &man.freebsd-update.8; utility requires - that the host being upgraded have Internet - connectivity. + will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as an + unmodified GENERIC kernel, distributed as + a part of an official &os; release. The + &man.freebsd-update.8; utility requires that the host being + upgraded have Internet connectivity. Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the &os; base system from source code) from previous versions are - supported, according to the instructions in + supported using to the instructions in /usr/src/UPDATING. For more specific information about upgrading