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Date: Thu, 7 Mar 2013 22:18:16 -0500
From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU>
Subject: Re: svn commit: r41132 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook
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On Thu, Mar 07, 2013 at 10:06:45PM -0500, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
> > -      <para>If you can, please submit a &man.svn.1 diff; they are
> > +      <para>If you can, please submit a &man.svn.1; diff they are
>=20
> Moving this semicolon changes the grammar of the sentence to be invalid.
> It should be restored (or possibly replaced with an em dash).
>=20

Moving the semi-colon corrects the mdoc(7) macro.  There should be
semi-colons in both places.

Glen


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