From owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jan 14 13:40:19 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DF3E316A46C; Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:19 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF62213C455; Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:19 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.1/8.14.1) with ESMTP id m0EDeJaH046562; Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:19 GMT (envelope-from keramida@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from keramida@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.1/8.14.1/Submit) id m0EDeJ9c046559; Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:19 GMT (envelope-from keramida) Message-Id: <200801141340.m0EDeJ9c046559@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Giorgos Keramidas Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:19 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the entire tree List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Jan 2008 13:40:20 -0000 keramida 2008-01-14 13:40:19 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml Log: Reword a bit a part which seemed confusing. Using shorter sentences here is probably better for non-native English speakers (like me). PR: docs/119463 Submitted by: Gregory Delfly, gregoryd.freebsd at free.fr Revision Changes Path 1.99 +3 -3 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml