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Date:      Tue, 25 Dec 2012 04:12:24 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Hiroki Sato <hrs@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r40476 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R
Message-ID:  <201212250412.qBP4COdx074595@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: hrs
Date: Tue Dec 25 04:12:24 2012
New Revision: 40476
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40476

Log:
  Merge fixes from r244664.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml	Mon Dec 24 22:39:31 2012	(r40475)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/9.1R/relnotes.xml	Tue Dec 25 04:12:24 2012	(r40476)
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
       Detailed Release Notes</a>.</p>
 
     <ul>
-      <li><p>FreeBSD Jail subsystem now supports &#09;mounting <a
+      <li><p>The FreeBSD Jail subsystem now supports &#09;mounting <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=devfs&amp;sektion=5&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">devfs</span>(5)</span></a>, <a
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">sched_ule</span>(4)</span></a>
 	    scheduler has &#09;been improved on CPU load balancing of
-	    SMT (Simultaneous &#09;MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives
+	    SMT (Simultaneous &#09;MultiThreading) CPUs. It gives a
 	    10-15% performance improvement &#09;when the number of
 	    threads is lesser than the number of &#09;logical CPUs.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=233599"
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=boot0cfg&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">boot0cfg</span>(8)</span></a>
-	    utility now &#09; supports configuration of PXE boot via
+	    utility now &#09; supports configuration of PXE boot via the
 	    &#09; <tt class="filename">boot0</tt> boot block
 	    temporarily on the &#09; next boot. The slice number <tt
 	    class="literal">6</tt> or a &#09; keyword <tt
 	    class="literal">PXE</tt> can be specified to enable &#09;
-	  PXE boot in the <code class="option">-s</code> option.[<a
+	  PXE boot using the <code class="option">-s</code> option.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=230065"
 	    target="_top">r230065</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -78,12 +78,12 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=hwpmc&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">hwpmc</span>(4)</span></a> &#09;
-	    driver now supports Intel Sandy Bridge &#09;
+	    driver now supports the Intel Sandy Bridge &#09;
 	    microarchitecture.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=234046"
 	    target="_top">r234046</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>[arm] FreeBSD/arm now supports Atmel &#09; SAM9XE family
+      <li><p>[arm] FreeBSD/arm now supports the Atmel &#09; SAM9XE family
 	  of microcontrollers.[<a
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=236081"
 	  target="_top">r236081</a>]</p></li>
@@ -97,8 +97,8 @@
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=230302"
 	  target="_top">r230302</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, &#09; which supports GEM,
-	  KMS, and works with new generations of &#09; GPUs such as
+      <li><p>The drm2(4) Intel GPU driver, &#09; which supports GEM and
+	  KMS and works with new generations of &#09; GPUs such as
 	  IronLake, SandyBridge, and IvyBridge, has been &#09;
 	  added. The <a
 	  href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=agp&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
 	  href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=snd_hda&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	  <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	  class="refentrytitle">snd_hda</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-	  has been &#09; updated. It now supports HDMI, new volume
+	  has been &#09; updated. It now supports and provides HDMI, new volume
 	  control, &#09; automatic recording source selection, runtime
 	  &#09; reconfiguration, more then 4 PCM devices on a
 	  controller, &#09; multichannel recording, additional
@@ -148,12 +148,12 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=bge&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">bge</span>(4)</span></a> and
-	    brgphy(4) driver have been &#09; improved:</p>
+	    brgphy(4) drivers have been &#09; improved:</p>
 
 	<ul>
 	  <li>
 	    <p>A bug which could prevent the &#09;&#09;DMA
-	      functionality from working correctly, has been
+	      functionality from working correctly has been
 	      &#09;&#09;fixed.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229350"
 	      target="_top">r229350</a>]</p>
@@ -161,14 +161,14 @@
 
 	  <li>
 	    <p>It now works with PCI-X BCM 5704 &#09;&#09;controller
-	      that connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X bridge.[<a
+	      that is connected to AMD-8131 PCI-X bridge.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=233495"
 	      target="_top">r233495</a>]</p>
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p>It now supports &#09;&#09;BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY,
-	      and BCM 57780 1000BASE-T &#09;&#09;media interface.[<a
+	    <p>It now supports &#09;&#09;the BCM 5720 and BCM 5720C PHY,
+	      and the BCM 57780 1000BASE-T &#09;&#09;media interface.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229357"
 	      target="_top">r229357</a>, <a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229867"
@@ -200,11 +200,11 @@
 	  <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=cxgb&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	  <span class="citerefentry"><span
-	  class="refentrytitle">cxgb</span>(4)</span></a> driver has
-	  been updated to firmware version &#09; 1.5.2.0. This now
-	  supports device configuration via a &#09; plain text
+	  class="refentrytitle">cxgb</span>(4)</span></a> driver have
+	  been updated to firmware version &#09; 1.5.2.0. They now
+	  support device configuration via a &#09; plain text
 	  configuration file, IPv6 hardware checksumming, &#09; IPv6
-	  TSO and LRO, <tt class="literal">loadfw</tt> command in the
+	  TSO and LRO, a <tt class="literal">loadfw</tt> command in the
 	  &#09; cxgbetool(8) utility which allows to install a
 	  firmware to &#09; the card, <a
 	  href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">oce</span>(4)</span></a> driver,
 	    which &#09; supports Emulex OneConnect 10Gbit Ethernet
-	    card, has been &#09; added.[<a
+	    cards, has been &#09; added.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=231663"
 	    target="_top">r231663</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
 	    class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> driver now
-	    &#09; supports RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A
+	    &#09; supports the RTL8411 PCIe Gigabit Ethernet controller. A
 	    bug &#09; which could prevent WoL (Wake-on-LAN) from
 	    working on &#09; RTL8168E has been fixed.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229529"
@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">xnb</span>(4)</span></a> Xen
 	    Paravirtualized &#09; Backend Ethernet Driver (netback)
-	    has been updated. This is &#09; attached via newbus
+	    has been updated. This is &#09; attached via the newbus
 	    framework and works properly in both &#09; HVM and PVM
 	    mode.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=231697"
@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=234597"
 	    target="_top">r234597</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p>FreeBSD <a
+      <li><p>The FreeBSD <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ip6&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ip6</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@
 	    href="http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/"
 	    target="_top">http://people.freebsd.org/~bz/bench/</a>.</p></li>;
 
-      <li><p>FreeBSD <a
+      <li><p>The FreeBSD <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ip6&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ip6</span>(4)</span></a> protocol
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@
 	  <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=igb&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
-	    class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a>. and <a
+	    class="refentrytitle">igb</span>(4)</span></a>, and <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=re&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE"><span
 	    class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">re</span>(4)</span></a> drivers now
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@
 	    class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class now
 	    supports &#09; <tt class="literal">BIO_DELETE</tt>. This
 	    means &#09; <tt class="literal">TRIM</tt> command will be
-	    issued on the &#09; supported devices when deleting
+	    issued on &#09; supported devices when deleting
 	    data.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=238500"
 	    target="_top">r238500</a>]</p></li>
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@
 	    class="command">remove</tt>, <tt
 	    class="command">fail</tt>, &#09; <tt
 	    class="command">restore</tt>, <tt
-	    class="command">configure</tt> &#09; subcommands in <a
+	    class="command">configure</tt> &#09; subcommands in the <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=gmultipath&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">gmultipath</span>(8)</span></a>
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">mkulzma</span>(8)</span></a> utility
 	    have been added. This class &#09; supports lzma compressed
-	    images like &#09; <b class="application">UZIP</b> <a
+	    images like the &#09; <b class="application">UZIP</b> <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=geom&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">geom</span>(4)</span></a> class and
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ixgbe&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ixgbe</span>(4)</span></a> driver
-	    now supports &#09; Intel X540 adapter.[<a
+	    now supports &#09; the Intel X540 adapter.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=230775"
 	    target="_top">r230775</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@
 	    <p>It now supports a timeout on &#09; positive name cache
 	      entries on the client side. A new &#09; mount option
 	      <code class="varname">nametimeo</code> has been added
-	      &#09; and set to <tt class="literal">60</tt> (in second)
+	      &#09; and set to <tt class="literal">60</tt> (in seconds)
 	      by &#09; default.[<a
 	      href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=233326"
 	      target="_top">r233326</a>]</p>
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@
 	      mmap-backed file on an NFS &#09; filesystem, flushing
 	      changes to the data could fail &#09; under some
 	      circumstances such as errors due to &#09; permission
-	      mismatch and this failure could not detected &#09; as an
+	      mismatch, and this failure could not detected &#09; as an
 	      error. A new <a
 	      href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	      <span class="citerefentry"><span
@@ -541,16 +541,16 @@
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=nfsv4&amp;sektion=4&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">nfsv4</span>(4)</span></a>
-		filesystem now &#09; supports a new <a
+		filesystem now &#09; supports a <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a>
 		variable &#09; <code
 		class="varname">vfs.nfsd.disable_checkutf8</code>. This
-		&#09; disables the check for a UTF-8 compliance in the
+		&#09; disables the check for UTF-8 compliance in the
 		&#09; filenames. This is disabled by default. Note
 		that &#09; enabling this may help some
-		interoperability issue but &#09; results in an NFSv4
+		interoperability issues but &#09; results in an NFSv4
 		server that is non-RFC 3530 &#09; compliant.[<a
 		href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229799"
 		target="_top">r229799</a>]</p>
@@ -571,13 +571,13 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&amp;sektion=5&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a>
-	    filesystem now &#09; supports a new <a
+	    filesystem now &#09; supports a <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=sysctl&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">sysctl</span>(8)</span></a> variable
 	    &#09; <code
 	    class="varname">vfs.tmpfs.memory_reserved</code> to set
-	    amount &#09; of required free pages when <a
+	    the amount &#09; of required free pages when <a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tmpfs&amp;sektion=5&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">tmpfs</span>(5)</span></a> attempts
@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@
 	    target="_top">r234849</a>]</p></li>
 
       <li><p>FreeBSD ZFS filesystem has been &#09; updated by merging
-	  improvements in illumos project. The &#09; following changes
+	  improvements from illumos project. The &#09; following changes
 	  are made:[<a
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229578"
 	  target="_top">r229578</a>, <a
@@ -600,31 +600,31 @@
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p><a
+	    <p>The <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
-		<span class="citerefentry"><span
+		The <span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 		class="command">send</tt> command &#09; now reports
-		estimated size of the stream.</p>
+		an estimated size of the stream.</p>
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p><a
+	    <p>The <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 		class="command">destroy</tt> command &#09; now reports
-		estimated space which would be reclaimed when &#09;
+		an estimate of the space which would be reclaimed, when &#09;
 		<code class="option">-n</code> flag is specified.</p>
 	  </li>
 
 	  <li>
-	    <p><a
+	    <p>The <a
 		href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=zfs&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 		<span class="citerefentry"><span
 		class="refentrytitle">zfs</span>(8)</span></a> <tt
 		class="command">get</tt> command now &#09; supports
-		<code class="option">-t <tt
+		the <code class="option">-t <tt
 		class="replaceable"><i>type</i></tt></code> &#09; flag
 		to specify the data type.</p>
 	  </li>
@@ -651,7 +651,7 @@
 	    class="refentrytitle">gcc</span>(1)</span></a> compiler
 	    has &#09;been fixed. It could lead to incorrect
 	    calculations when &#09;<code
-	    class="option">-ffast-math</code> flag is specified.[<a
+	    class="option">-ffast-math</code> is specified.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=234023"
 	    target="_top">r234023</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-	    utility now &#09;supports <tt
+	    utility now &#09;supports a <tt
 	    class="literal">vlanhwcsum</tt> parameter to set or
 	    &#09;reset checksum offloading capability on VLANs.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=231221"
@@ -669,7 +669,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=ifconfig&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">ifconfig</span>(8)</span></a>
-	    utility now &#09;supports <tt class="literal">carp
+	    utility now &#09;supports a <tt class="literal">carp
 	    &#09;<tt class="replaceable"><i>state</i></tt></tt>
 	    parameter to set &#09;the state to <tt
 	    class="literal">backup</tt> or &#09;<tt
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=jail&amp;sektion=8&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">jail</span>(8)</span></a> utility
-	    now supports &#09;configuration file (<a
+	    now supports &#09;a configuration file (<a
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=jail.conf&amp;sektion=5&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">jail.conf</span>(5)</span></a>) for
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">rtld</span>(1)</span></a> run-time
 	    linker now &#09;supports GCC's RELRO (RElocation
-	    Read-Only). This prevents &#09;GOT (Global Offset Table)
+	    Read-Only). This prevents the &#09;GOT (Global Offset Table)
 	    from being overwritten.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=231579"
 	    target="_top">r231579</a>]</p></li>
@@ -724,7 +724,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=rtld&amp;sektion=1&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">rtld</span>(1)</span></a> run-time
-	    linker now &#09;supports GNU hash section (<tt
+	    linker now &#09;supports a GNU hash section (<tt
 	    class="literal">DT_GNU_HASH</tt>), &#09;which is a
 	    replacement of optional ELF hash section.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=235396"
@@ -794,14 +794,14 @@
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229588"
 	    target="_top">r229588</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p><b class="application">libpcap</b> &#09;library have been
+      <li><p><b class="application">libpcap</b> &#09;library has been
 	  updated to 1.2.1.[<a
 	  href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=236167"
 	  target="_top">r236167</a>]</p></li>
 
       <li><p><b class="application">libstdc++</b> &#09;have been
 	    updated to rev 135556 of &#09;<tt
-	    class="literal">gcc-4_2-branch</tt> (LGPLv2-licensed
+	    class="literal">gcc-4_2-branch</tt> (the last LGPLv2-licensed
 	    &#09;version).[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=229551"
 	    target="_top">r229551</a>]</p></li>
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
 	    target="_top">r235971</a>]</p></li>
 
       <li><p><b class="application">OpenSSL</b> has &#09;been updated
-	    to 0.9.8x.[<a
+	    to version 0.9.8x.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=237998"
 	    target="_top">r237998</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -828,7 +828,7 @@
 	    href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=tcpdump&amp;sektion=1&amp;manpath=FreeBSD+9.1-RELEASE">;
 	    <span class="citerefentry"><span
 	    class="refentrytitle">tcpdump</span>(1)</span></a>)
-	    utility has been updated to 4.2.1.[<a
+	    utility has been updated to version 4.2.1.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=236192"
 	    target="_top">r236192</a>]</p></li>
 
@@ -845,8 +845,8 @@
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=233447"
 	    target="_top">r233447</a>]</p></li>
 
-      <li><p><b class="application">zlib</b> &#09;library have been
-	  updated to 1.2.7.[<a
+      <li><p><b class="application">zlib</b> &#09;library has been
+	  updated to version 1.2.7.[<a
 	    href="http://svn.freebsd.org/viewvc/base?view=revision&amp;revision=237691"
 	    target="_top">r237691</a>]</p></li>
 



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