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Author: dru
Date: Tue Apr  1 23:26:30 2014
New Revision: 44416
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44416

Log:
  Fix grammo.
  
  Sponsored by:	iXsystems

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Tue Apr  1 23:24:54 2014	(r44415)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml	Tue Apr  1 23:26:30 2014	(r44416)
@@ -5104,7 +5104,7 @@ ifconfig_carp1="vhid <replaceable>2</rep
 
       <note>
 	<para>Preemption is disabled in the GENERIC &os; kernel. If
-	  Preemption has been enabled with a custom kernel,
+	  preemption has been enabled with a custom kernel,
 	  <systemitem>hostc.example.org</systemitem> may not release
 	  the <acronym>IP</acronym> address back to the original
 	  content server.  The administrator can force the backup