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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mh article.sgml
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keramida    2002/05/13 03:40:27 PDT

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mh article.sgml 
  Log:
  + Add tags to filename/command instances.
  + Add a comma to separate parts of existing sentences more clearly.
  + Change "Also you might want" to "You might also want".
  + Remove a duplicate <command>edit</command>.
  + Reword and split sentences, minor other grammar fixes.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.16      +15 -14    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mh/article.sgml

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