From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Dec 7 14:47:53 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3221616A4CE; Sun, 7 Dec 2003 14:47:53 -0800 (PST) Received: from electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU (electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU [128.205.32.2]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0598F43FE0; Sun, 7 Dec 2003 14:47:52 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from kensmith@cse.Buffalo.EDU) Received: from electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU (kensmith@localhost [127.0.0.1]) hB7Mlpus021859; Sun, 7 Dec 2003 17:47:51 -0500 (EST) Received: (from kensmith@localhost) by electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU (8.12.10/8.12.9/Submit) id hB7MlpSH021858; Sun, 7 Dec 2003 17:47:51 -0500 (EST) Date: Sun, 7 Dec 2003 17:47:51 -0500 From: Ken Smith To: Mark Linimon Message-ID: <20031207224751.GA21049@electra.cse.Buffalo.EDU> References: <3FD2F0C7.3040900@lonesome.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <3FD2F0C7.3040900@lonesome.com> User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.1i cc: freebsd-www@freebsd.org cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: RFC: rework of the main web site's "internal" page X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 07 Dec 2003 22:47:53 -0000 On Sun, Dec 07, 2003 at 03:20:07AM -0600, Mark Linimon wrote: > A mockup of the page (some of the links will not work) can be seen on > http://www.lonesome.com/FreeBSD_www/en/internal/internal.html. Generally looked much better. > I'm certainly looking for feedback on this. I'm not exactly happy with > any of the wording around the links, so I'm pretty open to suggestions: > for me, the main irritant of this page has always been the overall (lack > of) order and the huge link sizes, and that's what I've tried to address > with this specific set of changes. The patch was kinda mangled as Tom mentioned so the comments are less useful than they might be. You had several contractions which I thought we were trying to get rid of. e.g. "Here's a list of ..." For the list of machines available in the main FreeBSD cluster the purposes and owners are a bit out of date. freefall is not the CVS master repository any more, a machine named 'repoman' is. freefall can best be described as a generic shell machine. ncvsup and ocvsup are both owned by kuriyama now. ftp-master is owned by peter and kuriyama. For mx1/mx2 the owner is dhw/peter now, in general dhw is postmaster. Thanks. :-) -- Ken Smith - From there to here, from here to | kensmith@cse.buffalo.edu there, funny things are everywhere. | - Theodore Geisel |