Date: Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r47095 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip Message-ID: <201507261005.t6QA5uvQ060900@repo.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Sun Jul 26 10:05:55 2015 New Revision: 47095 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47095 Log: Fix redundancy. Sponsored by: Essen DevSummit Hackathon Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Sun Jul 26 09:37:26 2015 (r47094) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Sun Jul 26 10:05:55 2015 (r47095) @@ -466,16 +466,16 @@ above two lines. More examples for this file can be found in <filename>/usr/share/examples/ppp/</filename>.</para> - <para>By default, the <command>ppp</command> command must be - run as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> - user. To change this default, add the account of the user + <para>By default, <command>ppp</command> must be + run as <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>. + To change this default, add the account of the user who should run <command>ppp</command> to the <systemitem class="groupname">network</systemitem> group in <filename>/etc/group</filename>.</para> <para>Then, give the user access to one or more entries in - <filename>/etc/ppp/ppp.conf</filename> using the - <command>allow</command> command. For example, to give + <filename>/etc/ppp/ppp.conf</filename> with + <command>allow</command>. For example, to give <systemitem class="username">fred</systemitem> and <systemitem class="username">mary</systemitem> permission to only the <literal>provider:</literal> entry, @@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct $IDENT</progr <primary><acronym>PPP</acronym> shells</primary> </indexterm> - <para>Create the <filename>ppp-shell</filename> file as + <para>Create <filename>ppp-shell</filename> as above, and for each account with statically assigned <acronym>IP</acronym>s create a symbolic link to <filename>ppp-shell</filename>.</para> @@ -623,8 +623,8 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct $IDENT</progr <title>Setting Up <filename>ppp.conf</filename> for Dynamic <acronym>IP</acronym> Users</title> - <para>The <filename>/etc/ppp/ppp.conf</filename> file - should contain something along the lines of:</para> + <para>Ensure that <filename>/etc/ppp/ppp.conf</filename> + contains something along the lines of:</para> <programlisting>default: set debug phase lcp chat @@ -1043,10 +1043,9 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct pap$IDENT</pr <para>Each user logging in with this method will need to have a username/password in - <filename>/etc/ppp/ppp.secret</filename> file, or + <filename>/etc/ppp/ppp.secret</filename>, or alternatively add the following option to authenticate - users via PAP from the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> - file.</para> + users via PAP from <filename>/etc/passwd</filename>.</para> <programlisting>enable passwdauth</programlisting> @@ -1378,9 +1377,9 @@ ppp_profile="name_of_service_provider"</ <para>The profile name (service tag) will be used in the PPPoE configuration entry in <filename>ppp.conf</filename> as the - provider part of the <command>set device</command> command - (see the &man.ppp.8; manual page for full details). It should - look like this:</para> + provider part for <command>set device</command>. Refer to + &man.ppp.8; for full details. It should look like + this:</para> <programlisting>set device PPPoE:<replaceable>xl1</replaceable>:<replaceable>ISP</replaceable></programlisting> @@ -1516,8 +1515,8 @@ ppp_profile="adsl"</programlisting> <filename>mpd.conf</filename>:</para> <note> - <para>This example of the <filename>mpd.conf</filename> file - only works with <application>mpd</application> 4.x.</para> + <para>This example <filename>mpd.conf</filename> only works + with <application>mpd</application> 4.x.</para> </note> <programlisting>default: @@ -1555,8 +1554,8 @@ adsl: </callout> </calloutlist> - <para>The <filename>mpd.links</filename> file contains information - about the link, or links, to establish. An example + <para>Information about the link, or links, to establish is found + in <filename>mpd.links</filename>. An example <filename>mpd.links</filename> to accompany the above example is given beneath:</para>
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