From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 29 16:10:07 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A54CB106568E for ; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:10:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6816B8FC2A for ; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:10:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id n6TGA46m051684 for ; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:10:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id n6TGA4Vt051683; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:10:04 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:10:04 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200907291610.n6TGA4Vt051683@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Glen Barber Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F239A1065697 for ; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::21]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DFBE08FC19 for ; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id n6TG1pV6082498 for ; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id n6TG1ptk082497; Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200907291601.n6TG1ptk082497@www.freebsd.org> Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 GMT From: Glen Barber To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Cc: Subject: docs/137243: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:10:08 -0000 >Number: 137243 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Wed Jul 29 16:10:04 UTC 2009 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Glen Barber >Release: 8.0-BETA2 >Organization: >Environment: FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA2 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA2 #11 r195886: Sun Jul 26 05:27:01 EDT 2009 root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION i386 >Description: Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors. The handbook states the following: "This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran." This should either be: a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run. or b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run. [1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR Patch attached with submission follows: --- cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.orig 2009-07-29 11:46:13.000000000 -0400 +++ cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 2009-07-29 11:50:23.000000000 -0400 @@ -281,8 +281,8 @@ @daily root freebsd-update cron - This entry states that once every day, the - freebsd-update will be ran. In this way, + This entry states that once every day, + freebsd-update will run. In this way, using the argument, freebsd-update will only check if updates exist. If patches exist, they will automatically be downloaded >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: