From owner-freebsd-doc Thu Jul 27 13:50:13 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.ORG [204.216.27.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 57ED737C1D8 for ; Thu, 27 Jul 2000 13:50:05 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.9.3/8.9.2) id NAA21754; Thu, 27 Jul 2000 13:50:05 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2000 13:50:05 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <200007272050.NAA21754@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Cc: From: Udo Erdelhoff Subject: Re: docs/20209: [PATCH] Update of FAQ to 4.1 Reply-To: Udo Erdelhoff Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/20209; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Udo Erdelhoff To: eogren@earthlink.net Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: docs/20209: [PATCH] Update of FAQ to 4.1 Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2000 20:18:39 +0200 On Thu, Jul 27, 2000 at 02:24:25AM -0400, eogren@earthlink.net wrote: Some comments: > Index: book.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /usr/local/doctree/doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.80 > diff -u -r1.80 book.sgml > --- book.sgml 2000/07/25 18:24:48 1.80 > +++ book.sgml 2000/07/27 06:19:25 > @@ -154,9 +154,9 @@ > - URL="ftp://[...]/releases/i386/4.0-RELEASE/">4.0 > + URL="ftp://[...]/releases/i386/4.1-RELEASE/">4.0 ^^^ ^^^ You may want to use 1,$s/4\.0/4.1/g next time ;-) > @@ -300,23 +300,26 @@ > 3.0-RELEASE (Oct 1998) > | > | [3.0-STABLE] > - *BRANCH* 3.1-RELESE (Feb 1999) -> 3.2 -> 3.3 -> 3.4 -> ... future 3.x releases ... > + *BRANCH* 3.1-RELEASE (Feb 1999) -> 3.2 -> 3.3 -> 3.4 -> ... future 3.x releases ... > | (May 1999) (Sep 1999) (Dec 1999) You may want to add 3.5-RELEASE (June 2000) > - with the release of 2.2.8. 3.4-STABLE has now replaced it, > + with the release of 2.2.8. 3-STABLE replaced it, > with 3.4-RELEASE being released in mid-December 1999. "with 3.5-RELEASE having been released in June 2000" > @@ -408,9 +411,9 @@ > - The current 4.X-STABLE release, 4.0-RELEASE can be > + The current 4.X-STABLE release, 4.1-RELEASE can be I would prefer to use 4-STABLE instead of 4.X-STABLE. There's only one CVS Branch for the variouses 4.X-Releases. > found in the - URL="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/i386/4.0-RELEASE/"> the 4.0-RELEASE directory. > + URL="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/releases/i386/4.1-RELEASE/"> the 4.1-RELEASE directory. will result in "... found in the directory." (link part denoted by <>) One of the two "the" can be removed and the word directory should be a part of the link, too. In other words, use found in . and get "...found in " > @@ -3877,7 +3880,7 @@ > > > > -for 4.0-RELEASE/4.X-STABLE > +for 4.1-RELEASE/4.X-STABLE Again, I'd prefer to use 4-STABLE instead of 4.X-STABLE. /s/Udo -- "I say we take off and nuke the site from orbit - it's the only way to be sure." (Aliens II) To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message