Date: Thu, 3 Apr 2014 12:58:12 +0000 (UTC) From: Dru Lavigne <dru@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44425 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports Message-ID: <201404031258.s33CwCWi080012@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: dru Date: Thu Apr 3 12:58:12 2014 New Revision: 44425 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44425 Log: Minor wordsmithing suggested by bjk and wblock. Submitted by: bjk, wblock Sponsored by: iXsystems Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Wed Apr 2 20:11:22 2014 (r44424) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Thu Apr 3 12:58:12 2014 (r44425) @@ -1543,25 +1543,25 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB <para><application>Poudriere</application> is a <acronym>BSD</acronym>-licensed utility for creating and testing &os; packages. It uses &os; jails to set up isolated - compilation environments which can be used to build packages for - versions of &os; that are different from the box on which it is + compilation environments. These jails can be used to build packages for + versions of &os; that are different from the system on which it is installed, and also to build packages for i386 if the host is an - &arch.amd64; system. Once the packages are built, they will be - in a layout identical to the official mirrors and are therefore - usable by &man.pkg.8; and other package management + &arch.amd64; system. Once the packages are built, they are + in a layout identical to the official mirrors. These packages + are usable by &man.pkg.8; and other package management tools.</para> - <para><application>Poudriere</application> can be installed using + <para><application>Poudriere</application> is installed using the <package role="port">ports-mgmt/poudriere</package> package - or port. The installation will include a sample configuration + or port. The installation includes a sample configuration file <filename>/usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf.sample</filename>. - This file should be copied to - <filename>/usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf</filename> which can - then be edited to suit the local configuration.</para> + Copy this file to + <filename>/usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf</filename>. Edit the + copied file to suit the local configuration.</para> <para>While <acronym>ZFS</acronym> is not required on the system running <application>poudriere</application>, it is beneficial. - When <acronym>ZFS</acronym> is used, the + When <acronym>ZFS</acronym> is used, <varname>ZPOOL</varname> must be specified in <filename>/usr/local/etc/poudriere.conf</filename> and <varname>FREEBSD_HOST</varname> should be set to a nearby @@ -1583,14 +1583,14 @@ The deinstallation will free 229 kB <sect2 xml:id="poudriere-initialization"> <title>Initialize Jails and Port Trees</title> - <para>Once configured, initialize + <para>After configuration, initialize <application>poudriere</application> so that it installs a jail with the required &os; tree and a ports tree. Specify a name for the jail using <option>-j</option> and the &os; version with <option>-v</option>. On systems running &os;/&arch.amd64;, the architecture can be set with <option>-a</option> to either <literal>i386</literal> or - <literal>amd64</literal>. The default is to use the + <literal>amd64</literal>. The default is the architecture shown by <command>uname</command>.</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>poudriere jail -c -j <replaceable>10amd64</replaceable> -v <replaceable>10.0-RELEASE</replaceable></userinput> @@ -1666,13 +1666,13 @@ devel/git ports-mgmt/pkg ...</programlisting> - <para>To configure the options and dependencies for the - specified ports:</para> + <para>Options and dependencies for the specified ports are + configured::</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>poudriere options -j <replaceable>10amd64</replaceable> -p <replaceable>local</replaceable> -z <replaceable>workstation</replaceable> -f <replaceable>workstation-pkglist</replaceable></userinput></screen> - <para>Finally, to build the packages and create the package - repository:</para> + <para>Finally, packages are built and a package + repository is created:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>poudriere bulk -j <replaceable>10amd64</replaceable> -p <replaceable>local</replaceable> -z <replaceable>workstation</replaceable> -f <replaceable>workstation-pkglist</replaceable></userinput></screen> @@ -1684,7 +1684,7 @@ ports-mgmt/pkg that can be used with a web server to display build information.</para> - <para>Once the build is complete, packages are now available for + <para>Packages are now available for installation from the <application>poudriere</application> repository.</para>
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