From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Sun Jul 26 10:05:56 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7DDC39A70D5; Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dru@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 6D72F13C; Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from dru@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9) with ESMTP id t6QA5uHU060901; Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 GMT (envelope-from dru@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from dru@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.14.9/8.14.9/Submit) id t6QA5uvQ060900; Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 GMT (envelope-from dru@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201507261005.t6QA5uvQ060900@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: dru set sender to dru@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Dru Lavigne Date: Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r47095 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 26 Jul 2015 10:05:56 -0000 Author: dru Date: Sun Jul 26 10:05:55 2015 New Revision: 47095 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47095 Log: Fix redundancy. Sponsored by: Essen DevSummit Hackathon Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Sun Jul 26 09:37:26 2015 (r47094) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.xml Sun Jul 26 10:05:55 2015 (r47095) @@ -466,16 +466,16 @@ above two lines. More examples for this file can be found in /usr/share/examples/ppp/. - By default, the ppp command must be - run as the root - user. To change this default, add the account of the user + By default, ppp must be + run as root. + To change this default, add the account of the user who should run ppp to the network group in /etc/group. Then, give the user access to one or more entries in - /etc/ppp/ppp.conf using the - allow command. For example, to give + /etc/ppp/ppp.conf with + allow. For example, to give fred and mary permission to only the provider: entry, @@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct $IDENTPPP shells - Create the ppp-shell file as + Create ppp-shell as above, and for each account with statically assigned IPs create a symbolic link to ppp-shell. @@ -623,8 +623,8 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct $IDENTSetting Up ppp.conf for Dynamic IP Users - The /etc/ppp/ppp.conf file - should contain something along the lines of: + Ensure that /etc/ppp/ppp.conf + contains something along the lines of: default: set debug phase lcp chat @@ -1043,10 +1043,9 @@ exec /usr/sbin/ppp -direct pap$IDENTEach user logging in with this method will need to have a username/password in - /etc/ppp/ppp.secret file, or + /etc/ppp/ppp.secret, or alternatively add the following option to authenticate - users via PAP from the /etc/passwd - file. + users via PAP from /etc/passwd. enable passwdauth @@ -1378,9 +1377,9 @@ ppp_profile="name_of_service_provider"The profile name (service tag) will be used in the PPPoE configuration entry in ppp.conf as the - provider part of the set device command - (see the &man.ppp.8; manual page for full details). It should - look like this: + provider part for set device. Refer to + &man.ppp.8; for full details. It should look like + this: set device PPPoE:xl1:ISP @@ -1516,8 +1515,8 @@ ppp_profile="adsl" mpd.conf: - This example of the mpd.conf file - only works with mpd 4.x. + This example mpd.conf only works + with mpd 4.x. default: @@ -1555,8 +1554,8 @@ adsl: - The mpd.links file contains information - about the link, or links, to establish. An example + Information about the link, or links, to establish is found + in mpd.links. An example mpd.links to accompany the above example is given beneath: