From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jun 26 04:23:11 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 30630F8F; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:23:11 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 212311C73; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:23:11 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r5Q4NAep081321; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:23:11 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r5Q4NAmt081320; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:23:10 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201306260423.r5Q4NAmt081320@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:23:10 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42058 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:23:11 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Wed Jun 26 04:23:10 2013 New Revision: 42058 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42058 Log: Point out that examples must be tested. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 02:25:45 2013 (r42057) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 04:23:10 2013 (r42058) @@ -71,8 +71,8 @@ rather than you can copy the file to /tmp. - Give clear, correct examples. A trivial example is better - than no example, but a good example is better yet. Do not + Give clear, correct, tested examples. A trivial example is better + than no example. A good example is better yet. Do not give bad examples, identifiable by apologies or sentences like but really it should never be done that way. Bad examples are worse than no examples. Give good examples,