From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jun 26 04:24:46 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 04375FFC; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:24:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E8E481C7D; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:24:45 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r5Q4OjNU081498; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:24:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r5Q4Oja6081497; Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:24:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201306260424.r5Q4Oja6081497@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:24:45 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42059 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 Jun 2013 04:24:46 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Wed Jun 26 04:24:45 2013 New Revision: 42059 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42059 Log: Whitespace-only changes. Translators, please ignore. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 04:23:10 2013 (r42058) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.xml Wed Jun 26 04:24:45 2013 (r42059) @@ -71,14 +71,14 @@ rather than you can copy the file to /tmp. - Give clear, correct, tested examples. A trivial example is better - than no example. A good example is better yet. Do not - give bad examples, identifiable by apologies or sentences like - but really it should never be done that way. - Bad examples are worse than no examples. Give good examples, - because even when warned not to use the example - as shown, the reader will usually just use the - example as shown. + Give clear, correct, tested examples. + A trivial example is better than no example. A good example + is better yet. Do not give bad examples, identifiable by + apologies or sentences like but really it should never + be done that way. Bad examples are worse than no + examples. Give good examples, because even when + warned not to use the example as shown, the + reader will usually just use the example as shown. Avoid weasel words like should, might,