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Author: dru
Date: Tue Feb 4 18:55:29 2014
New Revision: 43768
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/43768
Log:
Fix 2 grammos and a title capitalization.
Sponsored by: iXsystems
Modified:
head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml
Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml Tue Feb 4 18:53:37 2014 (r43767)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-users/article.xml Tue Feb 4 18:55:29 2014 (r43768)
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
compiled from ports using <command>make</command>
<buildtarget>package</buildtarget>.</para>
- <para>A complete list of of all available ports and packages can
+ <para>A complete list of all available ports and packages can
be found <link
xlink:href="http://www.freebsd.org/ports/master-index.html">here</link>.</para>
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ apache24_flags="-DSSL"</programlisting>
</sect1>
<sect1 xml:id="network">
- <title>Network configuration</title>
+ <title>Network Configuration</title>
<para>Instead of a generic <emphasis>ethX</emphasis> identifier
that &linux; uses to identify a network interface, &os; uses the
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ ifconfig_em0="DHCP"</programlisting>
<para>In some &linux; distributions, one could look at
<filename>/proc/sys/net/ipv4/ip_forward</filename> to determine
- if <acronym>IP</acronym> forwarding is enabled. In &os;
+ if <acronym>IP</acronym> forwarding is enabled. In &os;,
&man.sysctl.8; is instead used to view this and other system
settings.</para>