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From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 12 Jul 2004 02:55:07 +0000 (UTC)
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murray      2004-07-12 02:55:07 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Notes in <warning> should not begin with 'Please note that'.  The
    <warning> tag already expresses this information and so the text will
    be rendered appropriately.
  * Improve wording in synopsis.
  * Remove redundant sentences and simplify section about what will not
    be covered in this chapter.
  * Omit unnecessary words and improve grammar as appropriate
  * Remove redundant paragraph.
  * Use serial comma in list of elements, as mandated by doc project primer.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.10      +27 -37    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac/chapter.sgml