From owner-freebsd-doc Fri Mar 29 10: 0:10 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3B0A637B416 for ; Fri, 29 Mar 2002 10:00:04 -0800 (PST) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.6/8.11.6) id g2TI04988470; Fri, 29 Mar 2002 10:00:04 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from gnats) Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2002 10:00:04 -0800 (PST) Message-Id: <200203291800.g2TI04988470@freefall.freebsd.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Cc: From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen) Subject: Re: docs/36465: [PATCH] dumpon(8) Reply-To: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen) Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org The following reply was made to PR docs/36465; it has been noted by GNATS. From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen) To: Tom Rhodes Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/36465: [PATCH] dumpon(8) Date: 29 Mar 2002 09:52:17 -0800 Tom Rhodes writes: > Could you review this diff, see if this will be good for ya? > My mdoc(7) skills arn't the best in the world ;) Nor are mine, making testing a required part of patching. Your diff looks good, except that the sentence starting "In such cases use" (see below) should be removed too (it was incorporated in the new part). +.Xr loader 8 +must be used to enable dumps for system panics during kernel initialization. In such cases use .Va dumpdev And if you don't mind, you could remove a possible (but nonsensical) second meaning in the new text by inserting "which occur" between "panics" and "during" (see above). Thanks. To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message