Date: Mon, 10 Mar 2014 12:23:16 GMT From: Björn Heidotting <b.heidotting@yahoo.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/187417: [patch] Handbook: Add some missing <replaceable>-tags in advanced-networking section Message-ID: <201403101223.s2ACNGiD003413@cgiserv.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <201403101230.s2ACU3Ww071343@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 187417
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] Handbook: Add some missing <replaceable>-tags in advanced-networking section
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Mar 10 12:30:03 UTC 2014
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Björn Heidotting
>Release: 10.0-RELEASE
>Organization:
>Environment:
>Description:
In the advanced-networking section of the handbook, add some missing <replaceable>-tags.
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- chapter.xml 2014-03-10 10:54:27.000000000 +0100
+++ chapter.xml.work 2014-03-10 13:20:55.000000000 +0100
@@ -838,8 +838,8 @@
frequency and probe for available access points. Only
the superuser can initiate a scan:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0 create wlandev ath0</userinput>
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0 up scan</userinput>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable> create wlandev <replaceable>ath0</replaceable></userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable> up scan</userinput>
SSID/MESH ID BSSID CHAN RATE S:N INT CAPS
dlinkap 00:13:46:49:41:76 11 54M -90:96 100 EPS WPA WME
freebsdap 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac 1 54M -83:96 100 EPS WPA</screen>
@@ -921,7 +921,7 @@
<para>One can also display the current list of known
networks with:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0 list scan</userinput></screen>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable> list scan</userinput></screen>
<para>This information may be updated automatically by the
adapter or manually with a <option>scan</option> request.
@@ -1068,7 +1068,7 @@
to see the status of the interface
<filename>ath0</filename>:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0</userinput>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable></userinput>
wlan0: flags=8843<UP,BROADCAST,RUNNING,SIMPLEX,MULTICAST> mtu 1500
ether 00:11:95:d5:43:62
inet 192.168.1.100 netmask 0xffffff00 broadcast 192.168.1.255
@@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@
the information in
<filename>/etc/wpa_supplicant.conf</filename>:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>wpa_supplicant -i wlan0 -c /etc/wpa_supplicant.conf</userinput>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>wpa_supplicant -i <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable> -c /etc/wpa_supplicant.conf</userinput>
Trying to associate with 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac (SSID='freebsdap' freq=2412 MHz)
Associated with 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac
WPA: Key negotiation completed with 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac [PTK=CCMP GTK=CCMP]
@@ -1223,11 +1223,11 @@
to get the <acronym>IP</acronym> address from the
<acronym>DHCP</acronym> server:</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dhclient wlan0</userinput>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dhclient <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable></userinput>
DHCPREQUEST on wlan0 to 255.255.255.255 port 67
DHCPACK from 192.168.0.1
bound to 192.168.0.254 -- renewal in 300 seconds.
-&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig wlan0</userinput>
+&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig <replaceable>wlan0</replaceable></userinput>
wlan0: flags=8843<UP,BROADCAST,RUNNING,SIMPLEX,MULTICAST> mtu 1500
ether 00:11:95:d5:43:62
inet 192.168.0.254 netmask 0xffffff00 broadcast 192.168.0.255
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