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Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server
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manolis     2011-02-24 17:05:15 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server Makefile 
                                                   article.sgml 
  Log:
  Minor updates to the freebsd-update-server article:
  
  1. Reword of "much slower..." to "potentially slower..."
  2. Remove redundant mailing list in the tips section
  3. Use callouts to provide a more clear layout
  
  PR:             docs/154986
  Submitted by:   Jason Helfman <jhelfman@experts-exchange.com>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.2       +6 -0      doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/Makefile
  1.3       +37 -52    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml