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From: Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com>
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Subject: Re: docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml
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On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, gregoryd.freebsd@free.fr wrote:

> Quoting keramida@FreeBSD.org:
>
>
>> -        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability;
>> -          that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in
>> -         read-write mode.</para>
>> +        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability.
>> +         When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application>
>> +         opens the printer in read-write mode.</para>
>>
>> Does this look better?
>
> I guess we should avoid the repetition of "capability", though (the fdp-primer,
> "writing style" invites us to).
> What do you think of something like: " When present, it tells LPD to open the
> printer in r/w mode".
> My, I'm starting to feel like a fussy guy, now... :-\

<para>You should also include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so
   <application>LPD</application> opens the printer in read-write mode.

-Warren Block * Rapid City, South Dakota USA