From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Sep 4 12:34:56 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C2F2716A4BF; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 12:34:56 -0700 (PDT) Received: from pittgoth.com (14.zlnp1.xdsl.nauticom.net [209.195.149.111]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8873043FE1; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 12:34:55 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Received: from localhost (acs-24-154-239-225.zoominternet.net [24.154.239.225]) by pittgoth.com (8.12.9/8.12.9) with SMTP id h84JYrvd009545; Thu, 4 Sep 2003 15:34:54 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from trhodes@FreeBSD.org) Date: Thu, 4 Sep 2003 14:58:33 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes To: Martin Heinen Message-Id: <20030904145833.2c64f226.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030904210735.A68210@sumuk.de> References: <20030904133402.06da66da.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <20030904210735.A68210@sumuk.de> X-Mailer: Sylpheed version 0.9.3claws (GTK+ 1.2.10; i386-portbld-freebsd5.1) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org cc: Robert Watson Subject: Re: [Review Request]: Kerberos5 final draft X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 04 Sep 2003 19:34:56 -0000 On Thu, 4 Sep 2003 21:07:35 +0200 Martin Heinen wrote: > On Thu, Sep 04, 2003 at 01:34:02PM -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: > > > Please see the diff and give me feedback. This has already gone > > through a good review on -doc so I'm only really waiting for Robert's > > review. Although I want to get any final comments or "please commit's" > > now. > > Here are my final markup nits, otherwise I'm fine: > > > --- chapter.sgml Thu Sep 4 13:12:30 2003 > > +++ chapter.new Thu Sep 4 13:19:05 2003 > > @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ > > servers – meaning that external entities can connect and talk > > to them. As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become > > today's desktops, and as computers become networked and > > - internetworked, security becomes an even bigger issue. > > + inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue. > > This (still) should be a separate commit. It will be as it is a spelling fix and the rest are content fixes. > > > + &prompt.user;k5init tillman > > + tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG's Password: > > + > > + &prompt.user;k5list > > + Credentials cache: FILE:/tmp/krb5cc_500 > > + Principal: tillman@EXAMPLE.ORG > > + > > + Issued Expires Principal > > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG > > + Aug 27 15:37:58 Aug 28 01:37:58 krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG@EXAMPLE.ORG > > + > > + v4-ticket file: /tmp/tkt500 > > + k5list: No ticket file (tf_util) > > Why use multiple screen elements here? All output > is produced by the k5list command. Therefore > one screen element is sufficient. Fixed. > > > + &prompt.root;kadmin > > Missing space and userinput: > > &prompt.root; kadmin Fixed. > > > + kadmin> add --random-key host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > > + Max ticket life [unlimited]: > > + Max renewable life [unlimited]: > > + Attributes []: > > + kadmin> ext host/myserver.EXAMPLE.ORG > > + kadmin> exit > > [ ... ] Done. > > > + &prompt.root;kadmin > > + kadmin> ext --keytab=/tmp/example.keytab host/myserver.smithclan.prv > > + kadmin> exit > > The commands should be inside . Done my friend, thank you. -- Tom Rhodes