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Subject: docs/19618: www/en/register.sgml: nits
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>Number:         19618
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       www/en/register.sgml: nits
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jun 30 21:00:01 PDT 2000
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Daniel Harris
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.0-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:

	<Humid beyond belief>

>Description:

	Add a missing "the", standardize capitalization, add a missing ":".

>How-To-Repeat:

	

>Fix:

	

--- register.sgml.orig	Fri Jun 30 23:37:31 2000
+++ register.sgml	Fri Jun 30 23:36:16 2000
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     &header;
 
     <center><font size="4">Register to receive the FreeBSD Newsletter and
-	subscribe to announce@FreeBSD.org mailing list.</font></center>
+	subscribe to the announce@FreeBSD.org mailing list.</font></center>
     
     <form action="http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/reg.cgi" method="post">
       <input type="hidden" name="recipient" value="register@FreeBSD.org"><br>
@@ -35,14 +35,14 @@
 	  </tr>
 	  
 	  <tr>
-	    <td>Email address: </td>
+	    <td>Email Address: </td>
 	    
 	    <td colspan="3" align="left"><input type="text" name="emaila"
 		size="30"></td>
 	  </tr>
 	  
 	  <tr valign="top">
-	    <td align="left">Address </td>
+	    <td align="left">Address: </td>
 	    
 	    <td colspan="3" align="left"><input type="text" name="Address"
 		size="30"></td>

>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
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