From owner-freebsd-doc Mon Dec 16 2:17:55 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2A4D537B401 for ; Mon, 16 Dec 2002 02:17:54 -0800 (PST) Received: from heaven.gigo.com (heaven.gigo.com [64.57.102.22]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BDE6543ED4 for ; Mon, 16 Dec 2002 02:17:53 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from lioux@brturbo.com) Received: from 200-163-6-159-bsace7003.dsl.telebrasilia.net.br (200-163-6-159-bsace7003.dsl.telebrasilia.net.br [200.163.6.159]) by heaven.gigo.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 67739BAE4 for ; Mon, 16 Dec 2002 02:17:38 -0800 (PST) Received: (qmail 26673 invoked by uid 1001); 16 Dec 2002 09:56:11 -0000 Message-ID: <20021216095611.26672.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> Date: Mon, 16 Dec 2002 07:55:49 -0200 From: Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira To: Nik Clayton Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org, Giorgos Keramidas Subject: Re: (review plz) Documenting MASTER_SITES:n code References: <20021208234934.3628.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> <20021215203950.GD2816@clan.nothing-going-on.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20021215203950.GD2816@clan.nothing-going-on.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.4i X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 4.7-STABLE X-Disclaimer: I hope you find what you are looking for... in life :) Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org On Sun, Dec 15, 2002 at 08:39:28PM +0000, Nik Clayton wrote: > On Sun, Dec 08, 2002 at 09:49:12PM -0200, Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira wrote: > > That was the previous documentation. :) I've just finished > > writing a thourough documentation for MASTER_SITES:n feature. > > [...] > > > http://people.freebsd.org/~lioux/book.html.gz#PORTING-MASTER-SITES-N > > Thanks for the updates. > > Having read that, I'd tack your new section 4.4.7.2 ("Detailed > information") on to the end of the existing section. Humm, I've just updated the documentation with feedback from keramida. Could you check it? It is a lot less informal. :) And the markup is way better. > IMHO the replacement for the main body of 4.4.7 doesn't add to the > original text, and in the replacement text I'd prefer to see fewer I've just added that information as a historical background of the feature: where did it come from; as well as for creditting OpenBSD for the original idea. :) Check the updated version, I am sure there is a lot of room for improvement. hehe # sample Porters' Handbook with added section http://people.FreeBSD.org/~lioux/book.html.gz # patch against Porter's Handbook http://people.FreeBSD.org/~lioux/patch-book.sgml Regards, -- Mario S F Ferreira - DF - Brazil - "I guess this is a signature." Computer Science Undergraduate | FreeBSD Committer | CS Developer flames to beloved devnull@someotherworldbeloworabove.org feature, n: a documented bug | bug, n: an undocumented feature To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message